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Rate My First EVER Partnered BG?
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if you made this i wouldnt see why you wouldnt have 3d text or make the text look alot better. so if i was you change the text and it would look alot better.
6/10 because you cant read anything :/
6/10 because you cant read anything :/
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Try wrote if you made this i wouldnt see why you wouldnt have 3d text or make the text look alot better. so if i was you change the text and it would look alot better.
6/10 because you cant read anything :/
Like I said, I just started today.. so I didn't know what to make of the text.. so im watching speedarts for indeas.
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Great background but change he text color, you can't read it, so how is your subs gonna
This isn't bein harsh, it's just constructive critism
Hope it helped
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This isn't bein harsh, it's just constructive critism
Hope it helped
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Motto: 2b || !2b
Motto: 2b || !2b
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The render is sick, everything else it pretty bad :S
Keep practising.
Keep practising.
![Craig](https://imgttg.com/user/sig/681731_54890.png)
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I agree with Rati, the render is fine.
But, the text etc is really bad.
The text doesn't blend in too well.
But, the text etc is really bad.
The text doesn't blend in too well.
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This is actually really good for your first try, I would give it a 7/10. The text is hard to read. As fo. The 3d iI would make the center text 3d and leave the other ones 2d but that's just my style.
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5/10.
Good C4D, but the rest is really bad. I don't know if you're using a cc or not, but use a dark one. Also the text, either leave it out or render it out with the logo as one image, that way the shading and everything is right.
Good C4D, but the rest is really bad. I don't know if you're using a cc or not, but use a dark one. Also the text, either leave it out or render it out with the logo as one image, that way the shading and everything is right.
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Nice try for a first go, but you definatly need to practice a bit more.
Keep it up.
Keep it up.
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It's not bad keep trying tho you'll improve
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