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Hey guys. I just finished my First EVER Partnered BG. Rate it out of ten? Thanks guys!

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if you made this i wouldnt see why you wouldnt have 3d text or make the text look alot better. so if i was you change the text and it would look alot better.
6/10 because you cant read anything :/
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Try wrote if you made this i wouldnt see why you wouldnt have 3d text or make the text look alot better. so if i was you change the text and it would look alot better.
6/10 because you cant read anything :/


Like I said, I just started today.. so I didn't know what to make of the text.. so im watching speedarts for indeas.
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Great background but change he text color, you can't read it, so how is your subs gonna

This isn't bein harsh, it's just constructive critism

Hope it helped

-Pinkie
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The render is sick, everything else it pretty bad :S

Keep practising.
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I agree with Rati, the render is fine.

But, the text etc is really bad.

The text doesn't blend in too well.
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This is actually really good for your first try, I would give it a 7/10. The text is hard to read. As fo. The 3d iI would make the center text 3d and leave the other ones 2d but that's just my style.
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5/10.
Good C4D, but the rest is really bad. I don't know if you're using a cc or not, but use a dark one. Also the text, either leave it out or render it out with the logo as one image, that way the shading and everything is right.
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Nice try for a first go, but you definatly need to practice a bit more.

Keep it up.
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It's not bad keep trying tho you'll improve
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