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#11. Posted:
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The front cover doesn't look like something you would see on the front of a menu.
#12. Posted:
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With the main menu, I would put the contact information and location towards the bottom, as it seems empty, and leave space up top for a slogan or something.
#13. Posted:
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This menu is a little bit to plain. colors are kinda boring. need more colors.
#14. Posted:
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There is too much going on with the cover. Overlapping circles with text behind it makes it harder to read, the opacity lets you see through the cover to the menu inside which adds un-needed/un-readable text, the colors are a little too bland, and last but not least, there are some grammatical errors within this.

However, your design isn't bad and just needs a little fixing and color changes and it could be a pretty nice menu design!
#15. Posted:
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Mozo wrote you pretty much summed up the whole of the front cover lol


Well there ya are then time to change that
#16. Posted:
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I think the front cover needs to have more character so like get a different font that makes it look more stylish.

The main menu, well make it bigger, it's quite tough on the old eyes.
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