MusicNew To Rapping, Listen and Rate Please
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Please listen, give feedback, and NJY..

(The song title is messing with the link so go to my page and it's the song called F'em)

soundcloud.com/samjones-9
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im not much into the content on it, i listen to alot of more old school and lyrcism boom bap, but the beat was really smooth and kept me in for the whole record
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Disc wrote im not much into the content on it, i listen to alot of more old school and lyrcism boom bap, but the beat was really smooth and kept me in for the whole record


Thank you for your feedback, coming from a old timer who listens to different type of rap means a lot.
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Not bad but I'm not really into this kind of rap. Keep up the good work though bro. Don't ever stop
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4/10
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Joey wrote Not bad but I'm not really into this kind of rap. Keep up the good work though bro. Don't ever stop


Thank you for the feedback, it's really appreciated more than you know
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vibing wrote 4/10


Well hopefully I make something better and you can give me a better rating. Would love to hear some feedback to figure out what to get better at..
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Rap isent my cup of tea.

I will say though that I somewhat like the beat of the song but I don't understand the lyrics and the meaning of the song.

But if you keep practicing over time I could see your music being a big hit.
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ASAPcommander wrote
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Well hopefully I make something better and you can give me a better rating. Would love to hear some feedback to figure out what to get better at..



I fukz wit the lyrics, but I honestly don't like your flow maybe bcuz I listen to lil baby a lot nd he has such a different flow in every song, you aren't bad I didn't rate you 4/10 I rated the song homie, don't give up
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I like the quality of the song, your flow on the song FOR ME is too slow, ME personally I like melodic music for example Finer Things from Polo G.

For your first song it's really really better than most people who are just starting out.

I also think you'll need a good hook.. you just did one flat verse. In my opinion if you had a nice hook and maybe 2 verses it would be a banger
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