Looks amazing.

You did a great job.

9/10

Rareparrot wrote Looks amazing.

You did a great job.

9/10

Thank you. But the fact that this only has 2 comments, and youtube garbage gets 20+ honestly makes me a little angry with this place.

Its easy to comment on bad design than it is to comment on great design.

Branding wrote Its easy to comment on bad design than it is to comment on great design.

I agree, it's hard to give feedback to someone who's 100x more skilled than you.
On a piece you yourself (myself) couldn't pull off in any time soon.

I believe I already gave some input on your warrior guy, on it's individual thread.
But this wolf is outstanding, I can't really pick anything out that looks off or unreal.

The only thing I can say is that it does look like the two were made separately and put into one piece.
Which I'm pretty sure you did, maybe if the two were making eye contact I'd be a little more sold on it.
And again with the arm, it seems like it's at a weird angle. I feel like his elbow should be pointed towards me.
At an angle that makes it look like he's about to swing down on the wolf.

Other than that, the detail is amazing and I love seeing how far you've come.

Not bad but there's certainly flaws in this. The way you drew your two subjects isn't great. They look disconnected. They don't stare at each other. It looks like they're not in the same universe almost. There's no chemistry between the two characters. There stance of the warrior is also really awkward. Looks unnatural.

Other than that its okay. Maybe use more colors to give it a bit more life.

*EDIT : Just realized I posted exactly the same thing as the guy above me, my bad lol

Vmp wrote

Branding wrote Its easy to comment on bad design than it is to comment on great design.

I agree, it's hard to give feedback to someone who's 100x more skilled than you.
On a piece you yourself (myself) couldn't pull off in any time soon.

I believe I already gave some input on your warrior guy, on it's individual thread.
But this wolf is outstanding, I can't really pick anything out that looks off or unreal.

The only thing I can say is that it does look like the two were made separately and put into one piece.
Which I'm pretty sure you did, maybe if the two were making eye contact I'd be a little more sold on it.
And again with the arm, it seems like it's at a weird angle. I feel like his elbow should be pointed towards me.
At an angle that makes it look like he's about to swing down on the wolf.

Other than that, the detail is amazing and I love seeing how far you've come.

I had drawn the initial sketch all together, but had created the 2 characters one at a time, so I suppose you could say they were made separately.
They were also created weeks apart from each other, so that might account for any inconsistencies between them.

Now that you mention it I suppose they aren't exactly making eye contact...
And yeah I think I remember you mentioning the arm last time.
I see what you mean, the only thing is, to go back and change the angle of the arm is no easy feat.
I'd have to completely reconstruct it, and hope it matches the rest of the body, you know?
If I wasn't so damn lazy I would definitely try to fix that.

Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it.

Why is the guys shoulders so narrow compared to his head

It looks like you put a lot more time into the wolf. The warrior kind of takes away from the piece, he's in a composite pose.

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