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Does my intro need changing

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New channel needs your support
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KrimsonJay
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[youtube]Welcome one and all,

This is a re-post

My name is jay and i have started a new channel if you could have a look and give feed back on here or the comments section that would be great

I have has some feed back and am working on that please have alook and leave a comment on here or the channel

my channel name is Krimson Jay

The link is below

youtube.com/channel/UCuzdePbfoH-vq23_MiOLMKw


Thanks all

KJ
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Looks like all the same videos from last time, don't spam your channel here.
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shame you think that as i have put a few more videos on taking into account what other people had told me to try and thats why i was asking for some feed back on that, Oh and its only the second time i have asked for feed back...thought thats what forums were for.
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Then post your individual video, not your channel. Shame on you, posting your channel here expecting us to view it without knowing which video you want critiqued.

I'll critique everything for you, your consistency is poor. If you want people to subscribe you need to stay consistent with not only how many times you upload but the content you upload, every video is different. Play one game at a time or you're gonna get everything mixed up.

The only truly good thing is your thumbnails. For a new YouTuber they are really good.

Your descriptions are super small and contain no useful information. There is a 5000 character limit for a reason, fill it. Put in the game description a description of the video, links we can reach you at, useful information for not only the game and video but your channel also.

Not sure what theme you are going for with your channel as it is all over the place. Choose one thing and grow off of it.


I wish you the best of luck with your channel. Do take my advice into consideration.
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Thank you so much for that it is kinda what other people are saying as well, and i have been looking into getting things a bit more consistant improving the description and not trying to juggle so many games at once, thanks again for the input i have a starting point now at least.

Cheers again

KJ
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No problem, if you have any other questions let me know. Also look at my thread on the top of this forum for more tips.
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Would you mind having a look at this video and let me know if the description etc is better

thanks

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