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i made this for my friend he makes music, it isnt really made for anything specific lmk what you guys think about it, Feedback is appreciated!
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You should add some lighting to the image, it just seems a bit too plain imo.
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Opinion: Soften the sound rainbow effects to blend in with the background. The text stands out too much basically screaming "HEY" in your face. I would try blending everything together. It looks plain to me. I like it at its current state though, good job!
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Not to bad. I would add some more detail to it though. Besides the speakers and music board "idk the name of those" and some more depth to it. Make it to where if someone saw it, they would be like "dang, that's dope".
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No to bad buddy could use some more mojo just to plain
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You could work a bit more on the text in c4d, just looks to plain.
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You could add some more work to this! You could do some 3D work, & rearrange the images a bit. Not bad at all, just needs some work.
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Visxal wrote You could work a bit more on the text in c4d, just looks to plain.

Yea i used photoshops 3d xD
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thank you for everyones feedback!
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Squaji wrote
Visxal wrote You could work a bit more on the text in c4d, just looks to plain.

Yea i used photoshops 3d xD


Never use Photoshops 3D for text.
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