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Hi TTG I've been selling clothes I've been designing and coming up with for a couple months now and this is one I've created today. [I won't be posting links to the store page do to the advertising rule] Here is a picture of the finished product. It's nothing fancy just a little inspirational sweater coffee mug or sticker . Feed back is appreciated but I can't really change it since it's already done and being advertised. [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]
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I think it looks good.
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ImTheKidTurtle wrote I think it looks good.
Thanks I appreciate as simple as it looks it took quite a while to get it to how it is now haha.
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That's pretty cool, do you find that this stuff sells decently?
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iOSx wrote That's pretty cool, do you find that this stuff sells decently?
It all depends I try to create stuff that is relevant or trending in the world and try to advertise to that specific type of person. I recently sold some shirts that made a reference to politics and I made quite a bit of money and all it costed me was 11$ in advertising. I advertised for 6 days over 3million people saw it and I sold about 500 shirts.
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iOSx wrote That's pretty cool, do you find that this stuff sells decently?
It all depends I try to create stuff that is relevant or trending in the world and try to advertise to that specific type of person. I recently sold some shirts that made a reference to politics and I made quite a bit of money and all it costed me was 11$ in advertising. I advertised for 6 days over 3million people saw it and I sold about 500 shirts.


$11 in advertising but are there any other costs to you? How much did each shirt profit you?
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iOSx wrote
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iOSx wrote That's pretty cool, do you find that this stuff sells decently?
It all depends I try to create stuff that is relevant or trending in the world and try to advertise to that specific type of person. I recently sold some shirts that made a reference to politics and I made quite a bit of money and all it costed me was 11$ in advertising. I advertised for 6 days over 3million people saw it and I sold about 500 shirts.


$11 in advertising but are there any other costs to you? How much did each shirt profit you?
The company charges me for the shirt but thats taken out of the what I choose to sell the shirt for so say they charge me $7 for the shirt well I sell the shirt for $20 so in reality I make $13 per shirt. I never see any out of pocket expense for the printing process of the shirt the only thing I pay for is advertising and it has never been over $30 and that was for a whole month long advertise in November of last year.


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it's bad.

Why does the font look like the FTW emblems on black ops 1

The font and skewer of the message just doesn't look appealing.
The place in which you've put it on the hoodie looks so unnatural, it's boxed in
What is the purpose of the tree ? it's not a representation of inspiration ? a tree could possibly be a metaphor for life but everything that gives the tree life isn't even included in the picture.

The font is so aggressive it looks military related.

The purpose of the design is to inspire, I don't see how this could inspire.

First you need to work on the font and colouring.
The colour red represents anger and power it's not a colour for inspiration. The font needs to be visible so it gets the message across.

If you even google in the word "inspire" or "inspiration" you will see how different it is
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Ppl wrote it's bad.

Why does the font look like the FTW emblems on black ops 1

The font and skewer of the message just doesn't look appealing.
The place in which you've put it on the hoodie looks so unnatural, it's boxed in
What is the purpose of the tree ? it's not a representation of inspiration ? a tree could possibly be a metaphor for life but everything that gives the tree life isn't even included in the picture.

The font is so aggressive it looks military related.

The purpose of the design is to inspire, I don't see how this could inspire.

First you need to work on the font and colouring.
The colour red represents anger and power it's not a colour for inspiration. The font needs to be visible so it gets the message across.

If you even google in the word "inspire" or "inspiration" you will see how different it is
Thanks for your input and I had some people talk about the font also and the reason it seems boxed in is because I have a limited area of space that is actually printable I forget the dimensions but yeah. And as for the red I had tried multiple colors but the red was the most eye popping I would say and the font is actually a stencil font called old stamper supposed to look like a stamp thats almost out of ink. Thank you for your input though I'll be sure to go for a softer touch if I decide to do something in that direction again.
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Not something I'd wear other than for like jogging/workout clothes
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