_Jago_ wrote Hey I was just wondering if anyone could take a look at my channel and or some of my videos and just help me out by telling me what you like/ dislike and what I could do better? anything really, I appreciate it

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Also I'd really like to do some colabs but yeah advice would be amazing and greatly appreciated

I just checked out your recent video, I do say you have everything just right equipment wise, most people start off with really shitty setups but you seem to be doing just fine in that area. I do say the actual gameplay is interesting, but you need to talk a bit more, whether it's discussing something interesting about the game or something random, just talk about something. Also, it helps if what you're talking about is a bit funny or interesting, you know, something that brings in viewers, people love to watch content creators who can constantly make them laugh, or keep them interested the whole entire video. Now, I'm not saying fake reactions and scream at your monitor like pewdiepie, I'm just saying spice it up a little bit with some interesting/humorous topics! Besides that I don't see anything you're doing wrong, to be honest if you keep working and uploading a lot, I think you'll gain a lot of subs, you seem like a cool dude. Either way, best of luck to you, I dropped a sub and liked your most recent video!

cheers dude, it means a lot and I'l take everything into consideration when I'm making my next videos