Well in the beginning of the edit the color seemed a bit off(aside from what you had intended), so I guess smooth that out a little. Another thing is when the color keeps fading into different levels of brightness, don't make it sudden, instead have the transition a bit more leveled, but tbh I thought it was rather good for some of your first edits the intro doesn't really seem collected, like it seems as if you put two separate things together(which I think you did ), so it doesn't really go well with each other. Plus the second part of the intro was just the same thing bouncing, try adding an effect or an animation that doesn't stop but there is difference to it (not repetitive). Hopefully this helps, and I'm not talking down towards your edits, just some things to help improve! (My opinion) Well good luck and have fun editing!

its ok for starting bro, but the cc is way too bright and the trickshot you used has way too much nfl, use some from SB or Super and make sure you sync the shots correctly to the beat cause it was a bit off however its not bad for starters, good job keep it up

Just made a new one. I think this is my best one so far.
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