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Just finished a banner for a customer.
I was going to push the rendered image more to the right, but, he preferred him viewable on mobiles as well as the desktop version on youtube, otherwise I'd have had the render out a bit more.
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I was going to push the rendered image more to the right, but, he preferred him viewable on mobiles as well as the desktop version on youtube, otherwise I'd have had the render out a bit more.
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Te textured version Has a nice overall feeling but it would have been nice to see some distress on the text and shapes.
One thing that does not fit is the line under the text, its just not tick enough to justify it being there.
Perhaps another few point/pixels and it would fit better (sort of a thickness in between the top text and bottom text).
One fairly important aspect to the image is the render, and it just seems to be floating on the image.
There isn't really any blending at all and it just sort of floats there.
Perhaps a combination of adding a slate-dark blue -> black gradient for the background panning from the render (slate-dark blue) to the text (charcoal-black).
And some form of placement added in/on/around the render to make it seem less slapped on, there is literally infinite ways to complete this it just comes down to personal taste.
If you have any questions or need help, feel free to shoot me a PM.
One thing that does not fit is the line under the text, its just not tick enough to justify it being there.
Perhaps another few point/pixels and it would fit better (sort of a thickness in between the top text and bottom text).
One fairly important aspect to the image is the render, and it just seems to be floating on the image.
There isn't really any blending at all and it just sort of floats there.
Perhaps a combination of adding a slate-dark blue -> black gradient for the background panning from the render (slate-dark blue) to the text (charcoal-black).
And some form of placement added in/on/around the render to make it seem less slapped on, there is literally infinite ways to complete this it just comes down to personal taste.
If you have any questions or need help, feel free to shoot me a PM.
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Zef wrote Te textured version Has a nice overall feeling but it would have been nice to see some distress on the text and shapes.
One thing that does not fit is the line under the text, its just not tick enough to justify it being there.
Perhaps another few point/pixels and it would fit better (sort of a thickness in between the top text and bottom text).
One fairly important aspect to the image is the render, and it just seems to be floating on the image.
There isn't really any blending at all and it just sort of floats there.
Perhaps a combination of adding a slate-dark blue -> black gradient for the background panning from the render (slate-dark blue) to the text (charcoal-black).
And some form of placement added in/on/around the render to make it seem less slapped on, there is literally infinite ways to complete this it just comes down to personal taste.
If you have any questions or need help, feel free to shoot me a PM.
It was a bit of a 'To be added' piece. I've updated the OP with the final image. Thank you for your feedback though.
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Pretty nice man! Looks professional
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I feel that the render
shouldn't be as saturated.
That might help it blend a little better.
shouldn't be as saturated.
That might help it blend a little better.
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