lines are very shakey and need work colouring is poor as are shadows and lighting, you also seem to be missing eyes my friend.

- Ivan

Honestly I'm debating if I should be afraid of it, or sympathetic.

It looks scary. For real.

I don't mean to sound mean, but it's got a lot of issues.

The eyes and the nose are the worst.
I have no idea why you drew lines around your eyes, unless you're going for a racoon look.

I'd ditch the pig styled nose, too.
I wouldn't try to draw it from a lower angle (get rid of those 2 arches above the nostrils).

The specks on the right side of the face look odd. It's okay to leave small things like that out.

The lips look misshapen.
The line that runs through the center, should connect to the pointed edges, so your bottom lip doesn't look so blocky.

Some lines you can completely remove, (or drastically lower the opacity).
The lines in the neck.
The lines in between the nose and lips.
Some lines in the shirt.
Again, the lines around the eyes, and on the tip of the nose.

Finally, the shading looks a bit weird.
I think the darker spot running along the chin might be too dark. Especially the bit that runs up under the lips.
I personally try to be pretty subtle with facial shading.

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Source: 5 Years Experience.

Work on your eyes theres no like, white to them. The right eye is scaring me lol
Also use pentool and no spacing on your brush so the lines are smooth and not jagged and stuff like yours hear.Or a graphics tablet is a other alternative

Take your time.
It looks like you just started tracing s***
then went crazy with the paint bucket