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Well I haven't been on TTG for quite a long time and thought I would become more active again, hence the name change and gold purchae;- ).

Anyway, just thought I would see what you guys thing of this, it's the first signature I attempted. I did it in college a few months back when I completed all my REALLY FUN coursework, so yeah, here you go.

PS: Yes I ruined it with the triple Iron Man, but I lost my .PSD when the college switched server hosts, woo...

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Image is looking good man.
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For first attempt that is sick!
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Text placement is not the best. I would use a different text.
The render being replaced 3 times does not look good and ruins the focal point.
The fractals which I am guessing you used does not look good as it could. Make it more crisp and not as light. Gradient map over that area should do you good or exposure layer.
Overall though it looks good for first attempt from being gone for a while.
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ModerzFM wrote Image is looking good man.

Why thank you ;- )
Shakespeare wrote For first attempt that is sick!

Thanks!
SewerToast wrote Text placement is not the best. I would use a different text.
The render being replaced 3 times does not look good and ruins the focal point.
The fractals which I am guessing you used does not look good as it could. Make it more crisp and not as light. Gradient map over that area should do you good or exposure layer.
Overall though it looks good for first attempt from being gone for a while.

Nice, I'll take this into consideration, thanks for the creative criticism! :- )
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It's a pretty nice signature, the only thing I don't really like is the font on Iron Man. It just looks like it doesn't fit in quite well.
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Very nice work for your first attempt, keep at it bud! Hope to see you around the graphics forum posting more pieces later on!
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Hey man, not the wrong idea you had here for a first signature! Definitely a good try and some potential.

Here are a few tips to make your signatures better:

-First and foremost you have to target depth. A good sense of depth and light can make any signature look presentable. Some ways to achieve depth is not throwing too many brushes together and not strategically place them. Try to put them so they complement each other. Another way is blurring background, this provides atmospheric perspective.

-Another thing that is mostly a criticizing directed strictly to this picture, but it also serves as a good rule of thumb. Try to pick renders and brushes with better resolution. Bad quality absolutely murders a picture. It makes it look unprofessional and messy.

-Lastly, try to use colors that aren't so close to each other in the spectrum. It makes the signature look very monotone. This ruins a lot of signatures with potential.

There's some other things, but I don't feel like writing them all out. IF you have anymore questions I would be more than thrilled to answer them. Just shoot me a PM.

-Mac Miller
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