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This is the thread for everyone to post their entries for TheTechGame's Halloween Scary Stories Competition. *vamp01*
The rules are as follows:
Any copied stories will result in your entry being disqualified.
If you break these rules, your post will be deleted, and you will receive a short ban. This is your only warning.
How will the winner be decided? *6ghost6*
The winner of the first TTG Halloween Scary Stories Competition will be selected by the staff team.
Noteable entries will also be rewarded with candy and other treats.
This competition will last until November 5th 12pm GMT.
The rules are as follows:
- All stories posted must follow the Site Rules!
- Do not reserve spots! (Post when you have a completed story - Feel free to edit a story once you have posted it)
- Only post with your entry! (We do not need this to turn into a discussion thread, use the thumbs system if you like/dislike the users story)
- Your short story should involve at least one staff member
- Do not copy a story from online and edit it for the competition. We will be searching to verify that your short story is original.
Any copied stories will result in your entry being disqualified.
If you break these rules, your post will be deleted, and you will receive a short ban. This is your only warning.
How will the winner be decided? *6ghost6*
The winner of the first TTG Halloween Scary Stories Competition will be selected by the staff team.
Noteable entries will also be rewarded with candy and other treats.
This competition will last until November 5th 12pm GMT.
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Real- On a dark, dark evening, as the wind woke from its slumber,the leaves whistling by the smooth awaken wind, there was a little boy wondering down the street in his little grim reaper costume going to a party with a lot of his friends. His name is DaleUK. He is with his friends, one of them named Sean. But he wasn't the ordinary friend. He was a 'Best friend'. They met in year 2. Ever since, they have been best friends, forever the friendship shall last. As they were strolling along there street with there other friends. As they got to there scary destination, they walk up the overly decorated driveway to the 'Murder Madem' mansion. As they walk through the door, they hear a unending scream. As no one heard the scream, they had to investigate. They walked up the stairs, then suddenly, the screaming stopped, and a man walked out the bathroom, his face cut, his t-shirt ripped. DaleUK, on his own, went once again, up the stairs. He asked the man what had happened. They man said and I quote "Tell anyone, your next..." DaleUK beat the crap of the man, as of all, he was a muscle boy. The boys went down stairs to party hard. But as soon as DaleUK touched the last step, he was swept away, and was never, seen again. It does not end there, one night, as everyone gave hope, Sean could hear a voice while he slept he awoken. He sore a shadow, he went to sleep. But suddenly. Everyone in the house hold heard a scream, the murderer had its next victim. But who is the murderer? It was DaleUK...
Joke- As DaleUK walks into a cafe, he see's 2 women sitting at a table. Quietly. Shocking.
Good luck everyone!
Joke- As DaleUK walks into a cafe, he see's 2 women sitting at a table. Quietly. Shocking.
Good luck everyone!
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It was halloween night, and Bulletstorm was out as always, scaring kids with a mask. It became about midnight when something happened that bullet never would have expected. The mask formed to his face and tightened, never to be removed again. He tried for hours to get the mask off, but to no avail. He was cursed to wear the mask to his grave.
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This story isn't some story you'll be seeing in a kids book. This is a story that will shock your pants off. Just make sure to grab some popcorn and a drink since you'll be having the time of your life.
In a low populated town called Oxford where 2 kids DaleUK and Tattoo who had the guts to do anything, they would eat worms, Steel peoples money, Pick on the nerds, you name it. But the one thing they wouldn't do is go up the dark path up the mountain to the old ladies mansion. Some people say they hear voices down the path at night and howling wolves.
One night one a storming day the 2 kids invited some friends over to play truth or dare. Into the night they played while branches brushed the window and lightning flashed into the window. Until one girl came up with the dare no one would do. DaleUK stood up and cleared his throat and said "I will do it but only for a reward at the end." Everyone was shocked since no one has ever wanted to go up to the dark misty mansion on the mountain. Tattoo stood up and placed his hand on DaleUK's shoulder and said "ill go with you." Then a a bright flash of lightning struck with a loud boom after it.
Everyone thought of what the reward should be but one of the girls stood up and said "all the girls will give you a kiss if you make it back." The 2 boys looked at each other and said deal. They marched out the door into the dark night until they were unnoticeable.
DaleUK an Tattoo reached the path and looked far down but it was just black. They started to take small steps. Over them they can only see branches and leaves and all around them was just pitch black. The both of them didn't say a word until they noticed to hear words behind them. They looked behind them and didn't notice anything. They kept on walking until they heard someone talking but it seems like it got closer. They started to walk faster and faster until the sound went away. They saw light at the other end and jolted it. They saw the house, the creepy old broken down house at the end of the path. They heard footsteps behind them so they ran faster until they reached the end of the path.
They reached the door of the mansion and looked around to see if anyone was watching them. The door creaked open without anyone touching it and Dale took a step into the building. It was dark and they both had a hard time seeing things so they tried to find a light switch somewhere. DaleUK rubbed along the wall until he stopped to find a figure that felt was some type of human. He screamed and ran out the door and straight down the path until he wasn't seen. Tattoo was shocked but he didn't give up so he just kept rubbing the walls until he found the switch. He finally found one and whipped it on as fast as he can. The light flickered above and the walls were torn done and stuff was all over the ground.
Tattoo looked over where DaleUK and seen what he touched but it was just some statue of a guy named Sean. Tattoo wondered the house but couldn't find the lady who owned the house. Until he reached a room where it said keep out. Besides doing what it says he walked into the room and couldn't believe his eyes. He's mouth down to the floor and his eyes wide as can be. He saw the old lady doing the disco...
In a low populated town called Oxford where 2 kids DaleUK and Tattoo who had the guts to do anything, they would eat worms, Steel peoples money, Pick on the nerds, you name it. But the one thing they wouldn't do is go up the dark path up the mountain to the old ladies mansion. Some people say they hear voices down the path at night and howling wolves.
One night one a storming day the 2 kids invited some friends over to play truth or dare. Into the night they played while branches brushed the window and lightning flashed into the window. Until one girl came up with the dare no one would do. DaleUK stood up and cleared his throat and said "I will do it but only for a reward at the end." Everyone was shocked since no one has ever wanted to go up to the dark misty mansion on the mountain. Tattoo stood up and placed his hand on DaleUK's shoulder and said "ill go with you." Then a a bright flash of lightning struck with a loud boom after it.
Everyone thought of what the reward should be but one of the girls stood up and said "all the girls will give you a kiss if you make it back." The 2 boys looked at each other and said deal. They marched out the door into the dark night until they were unnoticeable.
DaleUK an Tattoo reached the path and looked far down but it was just black. They started to take small steps. Over them they can only see branches and leaves and all around them was just pitch black. The both of them didn't say a word until they noticed to hear words behind them. They looked behind them and didn't notice anything. They kept on walking until they heard someone talking but it seems like it got closer. They started to walk faster and faster until the sound went away. They saw light at the other end and jolted it. They saw the house, the creepy old broken down house at the end of the path. They heard footsteps behind them so they ran faster until they reached the end of the path.
They reached the door of the mansion and looked around to see if anyone was watching them. The door creaked open without anyone touching it and Dale took a step into the building. It was dark and they both had a hard time seeing things so they tried to find a light switch somewhere. DaleUK rubbed along the wall until he stopped to find a figure that felt was some type of human. He screamed and ran out the door and straight down the path until he wasn't seen. Tattoo was shocked but he didn't give up so he just kept rubbing the walls until he found the switch. He finally found one and whipped it on as fast as he can. The light flickered above and the walls were torn done and stuff was all over the ground.
Tattoo looked over where DaleUK and seen what he touched but it was just some statue of a guy named Sean. Tattoo wondered the house but couldn't find the lady who owned the house. Until he reached a room where it said keep out. Besides doing what it says he walked into the room and couldn't believe his eyes. He's mouth down to the floor and his eyes wide as can be. He saw the old lady doing the disco...
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Kelly watched as the bugs burrowed their way into Dale [Sorrynotsorrydale]. Peering through the window, she witnessed this most horrific crime, as the towering and deformed man emptied buckets of spiders, cockroaches, and beetles into the tub which contained her lifelong friend and lover. His final screams were gargled and laden with the crunching noises produced by his teeth making one last attempt to slow the influx of crawling menaces which were scuttling and sliding down his throat. The deformed man was shouting, "Now do you see how I feel!?" all the while.
Kelly vomited and hurled, the sound of which alerted her former captor to her presence, he had not realized that she had made good her escape, and quickly made his way out of the decaying house to return her. She attempted to run, almost making it to the tree line when her leg snapped, not due to a fall or an awkward step, but a bullet which ripped through her flesh and bone, and ricocheted into a nearby tree. Kelly screamed a scream which racketed off the trees of the surrounding forest, and soon dissipated into nothingness. As she lay on her back, she could hear only the approaching thuds of the boots of her captor, followed by a quick and sharp bang to her head from the butt of his rifle. She blacked out.
Kelly woke up, being dragged by her feet, the excruciating pain in her leg only dulled by the new pain in her forehead, and the golf-ball-sized lump to match, she was placed on a table, and left alone. She recognized the room, the tub in which Dale had been infested was now empty, and the buckets of insects lay beside it.
Her captor returned, and it was only now that Kelly realized the sheer gravity of her situation, she screamed, pleaded and begged until she was finally thrown into the tub.
With a final scream she asked, "Why?" The deformed man, holding a bucket full of various insects looked down at her and replied in a sharp and smug German accent, "Here, there is no 'why.'"
Kelly vomited and hurled, the sound of which alerted her former captor to her presence, he had not realized that she had made good her escape, and quickly made his way out of the decaying house to return her. She attempted to run, almost making it to the tree line when her leg snapped, not due to a fall or an awkward step, but a bullet which ripped through her flesh and bone, and ricocheted into a nearby tree. Kelly screamed a scream which racketed off the trees of the surrounding forest, and soon dissipated into nothingness. As she lay on her back, she could hear only the approaching thuds of the boots of her captor, followed by a quick and sharp bang to her head from the butt of his rifle. She blacked out.
Kelly woke up, being dragged by her feet, the excruciating pain in her leg only dulled by the new pain in her forehead, and the golf-ball-sized lump to match, she was placed on a table, and left alone. She recognized the room, the tub in which Dale had been infested was now empty, and the buckets of insects lay beside it.
Her captor returned, and it was only now that Kelly realized the sheer gravity of her situation, she screamed, pleaded and begged until she was finally thrown into the tub.
With a final scream she asked, "Why?" The deformed man, holding a bucket full of various insects looked down at her and replied in a sharp and smug German accent, "Here, there is no 'why.'"
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"Oh no" I exclaimed, "Thats Mark's hand". Naggy, TDK, Tyler, and I just stood there, everyone was speechless. We had to find Mark.
1 HOUR EARLIER
It was a rainy Halloween again this year, nothing new. I was getting ready to go meet Naggy, TDK, Tyler, and Mark at the Jordan Rec Center so we could play some basketball. We played in a league called, The Park. I threw on my Phoenix Suns hoodie, pulled up my socks and was about to leave before Naggy called me, "Hey xTriickz, want to go get some food at that new Chinese restaurant, I think its called 'Anime'..? The whole crew is going, it'll be fun". I knew better than to eat before we played, but I agreed to go. When I got there, everyone was inside except for Mark, I looked behind me and there he was, riding his horse through the parking lot trying to swoon girls. "Hey baby, wanna come over and ride horsies later on"? he said. She laughed and replied, "How old are you, 12?" disappointed, Mark parked his horse on the side of the restaurant, came inside, and we all ate. Afterwards, we agreed to meet in the locker room before the game.
For those wondering what Mark's horse looked like, here you go. This was a picture I took of him at his last birthday party:
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I entered the locker room about 10 minutes before game time. Everyone was there and we were talking about our game plan. "I don't care what the hell we do, as long as I get to treat somebody to a windmill dunk", TDK said with all seriousness. Mark started jumping up and down, "Can I play center??? Please please please I want to play center, please Naggy I want to play pleaseeeeeeee", annoyed, Naggy shook his head. Mark went to go get his gear on and we trotted out to the court without him. About 10 minutes went by and Mark still hasn't come out to the court yet, we were getting worried. Tyler volunteered to go look for him, but after 5 minutes, he came back and shrugged his shoulders, indicating he has no idea where he is. We left the court and went back to the locker room to search for him, when I saw something that turned my stomach inside out.
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There was blood dripping from Mark's locker. I went over to unlock it. His locker combination was 1,2,3,4, after the first four years of his life. "Oh no" I exclaimed, "Thats Mark's hand." Naggy, TDK, Tyler, and I just stood there, everyone was speechless. We had to find Mark.
The Jordan Rec Center is one big place. It has over 20 stories and a mile down was a basement, with no lights. Why they decided to put no lights in the basement, I have no idea. Inside Mark's hand was a note, "BASEMENT IN 20 MINUTES IF YOU EVER WANT TO SEE YOUR BELOVED MARK AGAIN". "Well good thing I don't want to see Mark again, he was my only competition for global" Tyler said. Naggy persuaded him to help us look for him, telling him that he will convince Sean to make them both globals. TDK opens the basement door, and he leads the way. Luckily, I always carried a flashlight with me in case someone gets kidnapped and we have to go look for him or her in a basement where its pitch black (smart, I know). "shine the light over there!" Naggy screamed. There he was, it was Mark. He wasn't moving. I checked his pulse, but nothing. Mark was dead. I found a note in his pocket though, and it was addressed to me. "If you are reading this, I am no longer living.. xTriickz, I always wanted you to know that you were my favorite member. Ive idolized you since the day you joined. I wanted to be like you one day. I am giving you all of my badges, and all of my rep, and I know that you will make a great sta". Something was happening. My eyes started to water, fog was starting to appear, I was scared. I closed my eyes, and when I opened them again, I was staring at my ceiling. "It was all a dream", I said to myself. Everything was a dream. I immediately logged on to www.thetechgame.com. I went straight to the shoutbox and everyone was there like usual. Except for Mark.... when I asked them where he was, they replied with something very unusual, "Who's Mark?" "Mark was never a staff member, what are you talking about?" "I don't even think someone has an account named Mark" "Dude, are you alright?" I had every badge Mark had, and all of his rep, but everyone said I've always had those badges and that much rep. Maybe Mark was never real in the first place. Maybe he was just a made up figure in my mind. I went over to my dresser where I found a note, "OPEN xTriickz". There was no writing. I was staring at a blank page. Then I saw at the bottom of the page. There was something written, it looked like a signature. It was Mark's signature. And that was the last I ever heard of him.
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1 HOUR EARLIER
It was a rainy Halloween again this year, nothing new. I was getting ready to go meet Naggy, TDK, Tyler, and Mark at the Jordan Rec Center so we could play some basketball. We played in a league called, The Park. I threw on my Phoenix Suns hoodie, pulled up my socks and was about to leave before Naggy called me, "Hey xTriickz, want to go get some food at that new Chinese restaurant, I think its called 'Anime'..? The whole crew is going, it'll be fun". I knew better than to eat before we played, but I agreed to go. When I got there, everyone was inside except for Mark, I looked behind me and there he was, riding his horse through the parking lot trying to swoon girls. "Hey baby, wanna come over and ride horsies later on"? he said. She laughed and replied, "How old are you, 12?" disappointed, Mark parked his horse on the side of the restaurant, came inside, and we all ate. Afterwards, we agreed to meet in the locker room before the game.
For those wondering what Mark's horse looked like, here you go. This was a picture I took of him at his last birthday party:
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I entered the locker room about 10 minutes before game time. Everyone was there and we were talking about our game plan. "I don't care what the hell we do, as long as I get to treat somebody to a windmill dunk", TDK said with all seriousness. Mark started jumping up and down, "Can I play center??? Please please please I want to play center, please Naggy I want to play pleaseeeeeeee", annoyed, Naggy shook his head. Mark went to go get his gear on and we trotted out to the court without him. About 10 minutes went by and Mark still hasn't come out to the court yet, we were getting worried. Tyler volunteered to go look for him, but after 5 minutes, he came back and shrugged his shoulders, indicating he has no idea where he is. We left the court and went back to the locker room to search for him, when I saw something that turned my stomach inside out.
(Play music for rest of story for full effect)
There was blood dripping from Mark's locker. I went over to unlock it. His locker combination was 1,2,3,4, after the first four years of his life. "Oh no" I exclaimed, "Thats Mark's hand." Naggy, TDK, Tyler, and I just stood there, everyone was speechless. We had to find Mark.
The Jordan Rec Center is one big place. It has over 20 stories and a mile down was a basement, with no lights. Why they decided to put no lights in the basement, I have no idea. Inside Mark's hand was a note, "BASEMENT IN 20 MINUTES IF YOU EVER WANT TO SEE YOUR BELOVED MARK AGAIN". "Well good thing I don't want to see Mark again, he was my only competition for global" Tyler said. Naggy persuaded him to help us look for him, telling him that he will convince Sean to make them both globals. TDK opens the basement door, and he leads the way. Luckily, I always carried a flashlight with me in case someone gets kidnapped and we have to go look for him or her in a basement where its pitch black (smart, I know). "shine the light over there!" Naggy screamed. There he was, it was Mark. He wasn't moving. I checked his pulse, but nothing. Mark was dead. I found a note in his pocket though, and it was addressed to me. "If you are reading this, I am no longer living.. xTriickz, I always wanted you to know that you were my favorite member. Ive idolized you since the day you joined. I wanted to be like you one day. I am giving you all of my badges, and all of my rep, and I know that you will make a great sta". Something was happening. My eyes started to water, fog was starting to appear, I was scared. I closed my eyes, and when I opened them again, I was staring at my ceiling. "It was all a dream", I said to myself. Everything was a dream. I immediately logged on to www.thetechgame.com. I went straight to the shoutbox and everyone was there like usual. Except for Mark.... when I asked them where he was, they replied with something very unusual, "Who's Mark?" "Mark was never a staff member, what are you talking about?" "I don't even think someone has an account named Mark" "Dude, are you alright?" I had every badge Mark had, and all of his rep, but everyone said I've always had those badges and that much rep. Maybe Mark was never real in the first place. Maybe he was just a made up figure in my mind. I went over to my dresser where I found a note, "OPEN xTriickz". There was no writing. I was staring at a blank page. Then I saw at the bottom of the page. There was something written, it looked like a signature. It was Mark's signature. And that was the last I ever heard of him.
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shortest horror story ever...
Sean is the last one alive on earth, he suddenly hear a knock on your door....
Sean is the last one alive on earth, he suddenly hear a knock on your door....
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Twas a moonlight sky upon the hallowed eve of Halloween, the sky torn asunder by the clouds foreshadowing the fluorescent moon.
I gaze into the sky bewitched by it's beauty, as I crept towards my car. The thought racing through my mind, the troubled echoes of my lost sister beacons through me.
I'm but a husk, in a world of might. I start my engine & drive off into the barely lit road. I think to myself "Only 15 miles, I... I can make it surely?".
I'm a troubled man, haunted by the images of my past the ever burning cinder of pain in my heart like cancer coursing through my body.
I approach the motorway, there are no cars to be seen. Not even a glimmer of life, the cold breaches through the gap in my window I shudder, and reach to close it.
I think to myself "4 more miles, a trip of my life". As I gaze out into the blistering darkness, a figure approaches faster & faster until suddenly my wheel arch snaps like a twig, the sound so monstrous it deafens me.
"What!? is this?" I step out from my car, to see the figure has vanished, nothing but decay and waste lay beside me. As I approach the wheel arch, I feel feint & sickness inside me burns my mortal soul.
I grasp my phone from my pocket, "No Signal! I, uh... I'm stuck here". I walk into the darkness, looking for someone. I travel miles & miles closer to my destination of which laid before my very eyes.
As I walked further, my destination got fainter until there was nothing but darkness before me. "I'm sorry, Hannah... forgive me" I miss her, her beautiful smile, her eyes as bright as diamonds. She was my sister & my only true friend.
She was lost in the darkness like I was, she was lost forever. Her life ripped from her by sin, as I got on my knees to pray for forgiveness I felt my life flash before me as it did her.
Then it rose from beneath the ground the figure, I had so aptly missed, a figure of pure white. It shown like snow on a dew-lit morning.
The figure approached closer & closer, stepping towards me with great pace. I got on my knees and begged, but the figure would not stop.
The light consumed me, I was in a world of white a place of purity. Then, I realized things were not as they seem.
The figure lashed out to me, with a blade of pure light thrust into my cervix. I pleaded for mercy, but none was given as a final blow was laid into my bare chest.
This is the night I lost my life, this is the night I was cast into the depths of emptiness. All was lost and so I thought, a life so pure the words were spoke "Hannah" I awoke.
It was all a dream, none of it was real. I'm safe in my bed, the sun is shining the tree's are are blooming & my body was pure.
Until, I realized. That dream was real, I had killed my sister, and that night she took me with her to.
Not really scary, but I'm not really a horror writer. I thought id make this entry because of the setting and atmosphere I tried to portray.
I gaze into the sky bewitched by it's beauty, as I crept towards my car. The thought racing through my mind, the troubled echoes of my lost sister beacons through me.
I'm but a husk, in a world of might. I start my engine & drive off into the barely lit road. I think to myself "Only 15 miles, I... I can make it surely?".
I'm a troubled man, haunted by the images of my past the ever burning cinder of pain in my heart like cancer coursing through my body.
I approach the motorway, there are no cars to be seen. Not even a glimmer of life, the cold breaches through the gap in my window I shudder, and reach to close it.
I think to myself "4 more miles, a trip of my life". As I gaze out into the blistering darkness, a figure approaches faster & faster until suddenly my wheel arch snaps like a twig, the sound so monstrous it deafens me.
"What!? is this?" I step out from my car, to see the figure has vanished, nothing but decay and waste lay beside me. As I approach the wheel arch, I feel feint & sickness inside me burns my mortal soul.
I grasp my phone from my pocket, "No Signal! I, uh... I'm stuck here". I walk into the darkness, looking for someone. I travel miles & miles closer to my destination of which laid before my very eyes.
As I walked further, my destination got fainter until there was nothing but darkness before me. "I'm sorry, Hannah... forgive me" I miss her, her beautiful smile, her eyes as bright as diamonds. She was my sister & my only true friend.
She was lost in the darkness like I was, she was lost forever. Her life ripped from her by sin, as I got on my knees to pray for forgiveness I felt my life flash before me as it did her.
Then it rose from beneath the ground the figure, I had so aptly missed, a figure of pure white. It shown like snow on a dew-lit morning.
The figure approached closer & closer, stepping towards me with great pace. I got on my knees and begged, but the figure would not stop.
The light consumed me, I was in a world of white a place of purity. Then, I realized things were not as they seem.
The figure lashed out to me, with a blade of pure light thrust into my cervix. I pleaded for mercy, but none was given as a final blow was laid into my bare chest.
This is the night I lost my life, this is the night I was cast into the depths of emptiness. All was lost and so I thought, a life so pure the words were spoke "Hannah" I awoke.
It was all a dream, none of it was real. I'm safe in my bed, the sun is shining the tree's are are blooming & my body was pure.
Until, I realized. That dream was real, I had killed my sister, and that night she took me with her to.
Not really scary, but I'm not really a horror writer. I thought id make this entry because of the setting and atmosphere I tried to portray.
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The girl was found dead... Teh end
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Once upon a time, there was a man named Sean. He got married.
The end.
Pretty scary huh? Sean's life is over!
The end.
Pretty scary huh? Sean's life is over!
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