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czr
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Hey there guys,
now here is a photo manipulation I did a while back and I wanna know what you all think about it.
Something I can fix, change, remove, and ect.
Any feedback would be great!

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Blending seems to be the biggest problem here. The stairs look flat, and they seem to be a bit transparent. The horizon line is very sharp, and unrealistic. There needs to be a better transition from the sky and ocean. The original stock has this same problem. and I'm guessing that the sky there isn't the original sky. The left side (from my view) of the boy is lit, yet that side of the scene is darker. I would've also liked to see some splashes near the bottom of the stairs, and near the bottom of the boy's feet. The triangle would probably look better if it had the same color correction applied to it, and desaturated a bit; making it look like it's in the sky and not on top of the sky.



*Sorry for the sloppy structure.
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iVaPoRGaming
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Overall I really like the concept. You executed it well, but I do have one bit of cc. I feel like the triangle could be another shape perhaps to fit the scene better. It looks a bit misplaced. The stairs flow well with the way the water is moving, but I do think it could be blended better. Still a great piece either way! Great job!
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I think it looks great! The water,stairs , lightning, etc. I don't really like how the triangle is done, but hey I don't think I could do any better
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