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Pin wrote This is a really nice website, and I especially like it how you've made it your CV. Great work!

There are a few spelling mistakes/typing errors here and there, so you may want to get it checked with someone before letting an employer read it. One that I found is:

However, I'm (not) quite there yet as there is so much to learn.


(You forgot to type not?)

I want to get into HTML/CSS a little more.. do you have any suggestions on where to learn it? I did a course at GCSE which covered it a little bit, and made a very basic site, but I don't think I could write something this good!


w3schools has excellent tutorials and will help you increase knowledge in any programming language.
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Looks very basic bro spice it up a bit and it will look good
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I love everything about it! It's very clean and it looks very professional! I would personally give it a 10/10.
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Pin wrote This is a really nice website, and I especially like it how you've made it your CV. Great work!

There are a few spelling mistakes/typing errors here and there, so you may want to get it checked with someone before letting an employer read it. One that I found is:

However, I'm (not) quite there yet as there is so much to learn.


(You forgot to type not?)

I want to get into HTML/CSS a little more.. do you have any suggestions on where to learn it? I did a course at GCSE which covered it a little bit, and made a very basic site, but I don't think I could write something this good!


thanks for your feedback man! much appreciated!
there are some sites that are really good for learning the basics for HTML/CSS if your really interested then check them out.

code academy: [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

W3school: [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]
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Great job for your first website.
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very nice very clear , good work buddy
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Hey. In my opinion I don't like the colour scheme. It just doesn't work for me, however, I'm more interested in dark designs. - Also there are multiple text colours which doesn't appeal to the eye. You should stick to two colours maximum.

Another thing I would change is having everything on one page. I would condense them into 1 page, per 2 "sub headings".

EDIT: You have a bunch of different fonts used throughout the whole thing. I'd stick to one, to make it look more professional.

Note: I don't dislike the design, I'm just picking up on things you could improve on.
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Extrayn wrote Hey. In my opinion I don't like the colour scheme. It just doesn't work for me, however, I'm more interested in dark designs. - Also there are multiple text colours which doesn't appeal to the eye. You should stick to two colours maximum.

Another thing I would change is having everything on one page. I would condense them into 1 page, per 2 "sub headings".

EDIT: You have a bunch of different fonts used throughout the whole thing. I'd stick to one, to make it look more professional.

Note: I don't dislike the design, I'm just picking up on things you could improve on.


Thank you for the feedback, I have taken it into account and I am going along with some changes now.
I'm considering about having more than one page but as its only a CV I cant see the urgent need for more than one page...
With the fonts, I have made some changes however most of my fonts are 'Open Sans', sans-serif' and its just the headers that are different.
If you could specify what fonts need changing then please let me know.
I have also change the body text colour to #000 'black' and the links have a a:hover{color: #0088cc} 'Blue'
Your feedback is much appreciated
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Pretty good for your first site!
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This web site and the design of it is beautiful. I love the animations and what not on it. Great work man!
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