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DeputyMorales
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This was my first attempt at a web design, I think I did alright. I think Im gonna try them more though, they are pretty fun. So just leave a reply on your opinions.




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Its kinda bland , But i will say that it looks much better that just a plain website with not colors etc.
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It's pretty simple.

A few bits of criticism:

In the "Welcome Guest" boxes, the body text needs larger margins on the sides.
The words come too close to the edge of the boxes.

A beginner mistake for web designs is making things too big.
If you think about it, the design will be on your whole screen, and will be a lot larger.
The text you have will be pretty large, and a lot of site's have smaller text.
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Illustrated wrote It's pretty simple.

A few bits of criticism:

In the "Welcome Guest" boxes, the body text needs larger margins on the sides.
The words come too close to the edge of the boxes.

A beginner mistake for web designs is making things too big.
If you think about it, the design will be on your whole screen, and will be a lot larger.
The text you have will be pretty large, and a lot of site's have smaller text.


Alright thanks, and ySense told me the same thing. I tried to minimize the text a bit but I guess not enough.
But thanks for the feedback bro.
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Not terrible but very very basic, and as Erik said the margins need a bit of a touch up. Next time try an 'outside of the box' design type for the web.
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