Hske wrote

Illustrated wrote It needs a lot of work.

First of all, you shouldn't use 3D text on a flat 2D space.
The lighting on the test is pretty bad, as well.
Try downloading a light room if you're going to keep using C4D... But you shouldn't.

The stroke looks bad around the text again, because it's a 2D stroke around a 3D object.
And not to mention there's a bunch of white spaces in between.

Then you just have what seems like random pictures thrown onto it.
Pictures of girls... so creative and original. Never seen that on youtube before...
It'd be a lot better off without any of the pictures. Especially stupid **** drugs. ;)

You could do a lot more with this. It's pretty basic, and simple.

Thanks for the feedback, and like I said it was my first ever banner and I tought myself how to do this. I didn't watch anything so I didn't know about all of this. Thanks again

I'm glad you didn't get offended. I saw someone thumbed down my post. It might have come off as mean but I'm just being honest and giving my opinion and some feedback.

6/10 great but pic on the side messes with it

amo3507 wrote 6/10 great but pic on the side messes with it

What picture are you talking about?

Illustrated wrote

Hske wrote

Illustrated wrote It needs a lot of work.

First of all, you shouldn't use 3D text on a flat 2D space.
The lighting on the test is pretty bad, as well.
Try downloading a light room if you're going to keep using C4D... But you shouldn't.

The stroke looks bad around the text again, because it's a 2D stroke around a 3D object.
And not to mention there's a bunch of white spaces in between.

Then you just have what seems like random pictures thrown onto it.
Pictures of girls... so creative and original. Never seen that on youtube before...
It'd be a lot better off without any of the pictures. Especially stupid **** drugs. ;)

You could do a lot more with this. It's pretty basic, and simple.

Thanks for the feedback, and like I said it was my first ever banner and I tought myself how to do this. I didn't watch anything so I didn't know about all of this. Thanks again

I'm glad you didn't get offended. I saw someone thumbed down my post. It might have come off as mean but I'm just being honest and giving my opinion and some feedback.

Oh well, I'm glad you were honest it will help me learn and want to do better to become better at it. And nah I didn't look at it being mean

I personally don't like it, there is no detail what so ever, however if you keep practising then I guarantee your work will improve!