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cahl
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My finished piece for spiderman noir.
Feedback welcome.


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cheers lads.


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the white glow, which looks like you've made a new layer and used the white brush tool with a low opacity, make the opacity a bit lower, i think it's a bit strong, but a definite improvement from the original
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ySense wrote the white glow, which looks like you've made a new layer and used the white brush tool with a low opacity, make the opacity a bit lower, i think it's a bit strong, but a definite improvement from the original
Thanks lad, will change it.
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The white glow is a bit too much, but other than that, good job
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iriisqx wrote The white glow is a bit too much, but other than that, good job
Check out the updated version, hopefully you like it.
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Not bad, but the tommy gun seems to have pieces missing on it, and the rain effect is atrocious for this sort of piece, definitely lower the opacity of the rain effect.
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ext wrote Not bad, but the tommy gun seems to have pieces missing on it, and the rain effect is atrocious for this sort of piece, definitely lower the opacity of the rain effect.
Thanks but the rain point is irrelevant because the rain has a low contrast anyway.
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pulsev wrote
ext wrote Not bad, but the tommy gun seems to have pieces missing on it, and the rain effect is atrocious for this sort of piece, definitely lower the opacity of the rain effect.
Thanks but the rain point is irrelevant because the rain has a low contrast anyway.


I do not know, it just does not look relevant to the actual image, just looks like an "olden time" gangster walking through the streets of lets say "New York" when it is raining. I do like the overall piece, just not the rain that much.
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ext wrote Not bad, but the tommy gun seems to have pieces missing on it, and the rain effect is atrocious for this sort of piece, definitely lower the opacity of the rain effect.


It's more the heaviness of the rain rather than the opacity, I would try and get something that is less heavy, may work, may not.
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I think it looks amazing! Keep it up
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