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Decided to mess around in PS and make a lookbook. Pretty Green use a lot of dark/tone on tone colors so I decided to keep the theme; Keeping it very simple and basic to match their previous designs etc. I might continue and make adjustments/more pages depending on how I feel.

Feedback would be very much appreciated.

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a set of photographs displaying a fashion designer's new collection, assembled for marketing purposes.

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That actually looks pretty good, I enjoy page #1 because of its simplicity but also its professionalism. I have no idea what lookbook is thought lol.

Oh also the dark colored jacket on the black background is kind of weird on the eyes.
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DeskChair wrote That actually looks pretty good, I enjoy page #1 because of its simplicity but also its professionalism. I have no idea what lookbook is thought lol.

Oh also the dark colored jacket on the black background is kind of weird on the eyes.


Thanks for the feedback. A lookbook is basically a showcase of what the brand has/is going to offer.

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Page one looks a bit empty and dull. Too fill up some room add some text and information about the item, makes it look more professional also.

For the cover add higher contrast to the logo, it is very low and almost blends in too much with the background color. I suggest putting the contrast to 90-100 for full effect.
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pulsev wrote Page one looks a bit empty and dull. Too fill up some room add some text and information about the item, makes it look more professional also.

For the cover add higher contrast to the logo, it is very low and almost blends in too much with the background color. I suggest putting the contrast to 90-100 for full effect.


Thanks for the feedback. It's a 'lookbook' though. It's not meant to really contain any in depth information.. just a small insight on what is to come in the near future.

I did mention the tone-on-tone logo but I will see if that makes it look any better.

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WizKhaIifa wrote
pulsev wrote Page one looks a bit empty and dull. Too fill up some room add some text and information about the item, makes it look more professional also.

For the cover add higher contrast to the logo, it is very low and almost blends in too much with the background color. I suggest putting the contrast to 90-100 for full effect.


Thanks for the feedback. It's a 'lookbook' though. It's not meant to really contain any in depth information.. just a small insight on what is to come in the near future.

I did mention the tone-on-tone logo but I will see if that makes it look any better.

Thanks. +REP
My bad, I don't get the whole point of lookbook, just seems boring to me.
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i defiantly like the first one nice and simple :3
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pulsev wrote
WizKhaIifa wrote
pulsev wrote Page one looks a bit empty and dull. Too fill up some room add some text and information about the item, makes it look more professional also.

For the cover add higher contrast to the logo, it is very low and almost blends in too much with the background color. I suggest putting the contrast to 90-100 for full effect.


Thanks for the feedback. It's a 'lookbook' though. It's not meant to really contain any in depth information.. just a small insight on what is to come in the near future.

I did mention the tone-on-tone logo but I will see if that makes it look any better.

Thanks. +REP
My bad, I don't get the whole point of lookbook, just seems boring to me.


I wasn't looking for an opinion on a lookbook, just some feedback. Thanks, again.
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FusionxViRaL wrote i defiantly like the first one nice and simple :3


Thanks a lot for the feedback.

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