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This is my very first picture I have edit please tell me what you think
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I would give this a 8/10, its pretty nice! Keep it up!
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WeAreAnonym0us wrote I would give this a 8/10, its pretty nice! Keep it up!

thank you that means alot to me me
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It is not an 8....dont get deluded.

You need to get away from the style you failed to replicate.

Flares only improve a piece if it is actually needed.

3D text if done right can make a piece.

Check out what blending modes do.

All I can say is check tutorials and practice practice practice.
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I like it, but you need to smooth out the edges here.
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Moz was valid with his points, should listen to him.
For me though the flares are directly in line with each other, don't have them on every side of the text, have them above a letter and below one.

Also StarTrak was very correct, take time and care and make sure you have no sharp edges when using layers of light rooms.

Overall this isn't a very good piece.
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It looks good for a first picture, especially since
you're already **** around with the 3D aspect of
GFX. The text at the bottom is very plain though and
doesnt blend.

Good job though
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