that actually looks amazing 9/10
just because i dont know what game it is from

Holy crap that is amazing 10/10

Looks really good man
8/10

GumMice wrote that actually looks amazing 9/10
just because i dont know what game it is from

It's a show! Full Metal Alchemist, man! It's amazing!

Pretty good.

Work on blending a little more and adding a few more C4D's.

Maybe some liney, squiggly, C4D's wrapping around his arm?

The text is a bit bland so work on that.

Also, there's some light on your renders face and a little on the side of his body so I would add a bit of lighting by taking a soft brush and about 300px and just make a very soft light using only the edge of the brush. Like this.
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I would also work on a little more blended Color Correction because the colors of your sig are kind of all over the place. I've made it B&W here because I think it suits it well.

Overall 6/10. Good job welcome back to photoshop and if you need any help feel free to pm me

Nyan wrote Pretty good.

Work on blending a little more and adding a few more C4D's.

Maybe some liney, squiggly, C4D's wrapping around his arm?

The text is a bit bland so work on that.

Also, there's some light on your renders face and a little on the side of his body so I would add a bit of lighting by taking a soft brush and about 300px and just make a very soft light using only the edge of the brush. Like this.
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I would also work on a little more blended Color Correction because the colors of your sig are kind of all over the place. I've made it B&W here because I think it suits it well.

Overall 6/10. Good job welcome back to photoshop and if you need any help feel free to pm me

TBH , The one you remade looks terrible. No colors = Trash. Also, What is a C4D?
To the original poster, this is very good 8/10

Truhmah wrote

Nyan wrote Pretty good.

Work on blending a little more and adding a few more C4D's.

Maybe some liney, squiggly, C4D's wrapping around his arm?

The text is a bit bland so work on that.

Also, there's some light on your renders face and a little on the side of his body so I would add a bit of lighting by taking a soft brush and about 300px and just make a very soft light using only the edge of the brush. Like this.
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I would also work on a little more blended Color Correction because the colors of your sig are kind of all over the place. I've made it B&W here because I think it suits it well.

Overall 6/10. Good job welcome back to photoshop and if you need any help feel free to pm me

TBH , The one you remade looks terrible. No colors = Trash. Also, What is a C4D?
To the original poster, this is very good 8/10

how can u quote an say his version looks terrible wen you dont even no wat c4d's are etc. Also u didnt even say anything bout the picture other than 'is very good' do you even no what your talking about?

Truhmah wrote

Nyan wrote Pretty good.

Work on blending a little more and adding a few more C4D's.

Maybe some liney, squiggly, C4D's wrapping around his arm?

The text is a bit bland so work on that.

Also, there's some light on your renders face and a little on the side of his body so I would add a bit of lighting by taking a soft brush and about 300px and just make a very soft light using only the edge of the brush. Like this.
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I would also work on a little more blended Color Correction because the colors of your sig are kind of all over the place. I've made it B&W here because I think it suits it well.

Overall 6/10. Good job welcome back to photoshop and if you need any help feel free to pm me

TBH , The one you remade looks terrible. No colors = Trash. Also, What is a C4D?
To the original poster, this is very good 8/10

I don't think you understand the concept of graphic design and the dramatic feel black and white can do.
I also didn't remake it, I was showing an example to help a fellow designer get better.

I've been doing this for roughly 5 years now so I think I know what I'm talking about.

To the OP: Again this is a great piece with potential just needs a few adjustments. Keep up the good work.

This looks sick.

But change up the text a little bit because it does look bland.

8/10.