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Background i made for my friend! I thought this was creative so yea....
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See THIS is taking the grungy style and doing it right!

For f*cks sake thank you!
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Zef wrote See THIS is taking the grungy style and doing it right!

For f*cks sake thank you!

lol thx bro
Any mor feedback???
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Truhmah wrote
Zef wrote See THIS is taking the grungy style and doing it right!

For f*cks sake thank you!

lol thx bro
Any mor feedback???


Yeah, i think you deserve it.
(all of these are meant positively, based off the speedart)

C4D:
-The pin ring is a bit out of proportion, it should be slightly larger in size (with was good).
-The font choice was not very good at all, i would recommend a new choice (but i now why you chose that one).
-The text effect looks a bit wonky and out of place, try to revise that.
-Overall depth of the object is fantastic.

Photoshop:
-The design is missing something to the left.
-Clean up the edging a bit.
-Grunge pattern looks a bit odd for a grenade, maybe try a slightly different grunge style (a bit cleaner with only dirt or a OD green digital print) *link below*

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An O.D Green or Monotone type of pattern:
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Zef wrote
Truhmah wrote
Zef wrote See THIS is taking the grungy style and doing it right!

For f*cks sake thank you!

lol thx bro
Any mor feedback???


Yeah, i think you deserve it.
(all of these are meant positively, based off the speedart)

C4D:
-The pin ring is a bit out of proportion, it should be slightly larger in size (with was good).
-The font choice was not very good at all, i would recommend a new choice (but i now why you chose that one).
-The text effect looks a bit wonky and out of place, try to revise that.
-Overall depth of the object is fantastic.

Photoshop:
-The design is missing something to the left.
-Clean up the edging a bit.
-Grunge pattern looks a bit odd for a grenade, maybe try a slightly different grunge style (a bit cleaner with only dirt or a OD green digital print) *link below*

Reference Links:
[spoil]An O.D Green or Monotone type of pattern:
4.bp.thetechgame.com/-_n_ifnpB0aw...attern.jpg
[/spoil]
that helped so freakin much! lol and the link to the pattern is screwed up...
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Truhmah wrote
Zef wrote
Truhmah wrote
Zef wrote See THIS is taking the grungy style and doing it right!

For f*cks sake thank you!

lol thx bro
Any mor feedback???


Yeah, i think you deserve it.
(all of these are meant positively, based off the speedart)

C4D:
-The pin ring is a bit out of proportion, it should be slightly larger in size (with was good).
-The font choice was not very good at all, i would recommend a new choice (but i now why you chose that one).
-The text effect looks a bit wonky and out of place, try to revise that.
-Overall depth of the object is fantastic.

Photoshop:
-The design is missing something to the left.
-Clean up the edging a bit.
-Grunge pattern looks a bit odd for a grenade, maybe try a slightly different grunge style (a bit cleaner with only dirt or a OD green digital print) *link below*

Reference Links:
[spoil]An O.D Green or Monotone type of pattern:
4.bp.thetechgame.com/-_n_ifnpB0aw...attern.jpg
[/spoil]
that helped so freakin much! lol and the link to the pattern is screwed up...

http:// image.made-in-china . com /2f0j00UMqaCveEbGcw/Digital-Camo-Print-XHMP8901-.jpg

no spaces
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fusionxvirals backround ;)
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AMAZING. Just saying ;)
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aZuReLoGiiCz wrote AMAZING. Just saying ;)
thanks bro <3 i try to make them sick af ;)
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You know what.....I like it.

Zef got it spot on with his feedback
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