Needs work dude, quite a bit of it too.

Lets start:

- Drop shadow is a good tool a VERY good tool but you have over used it and used it to much and frankly ruined your design with it. dim it down take some out.

- Try to fill the whole page if you are going to design it.

- Textures used art not very website friendly and the bolts are horrid there man fix that!

- Overall this need a re vamp with cleaner font and better layer styles, everything just looks out of place and needs to be fully fixed.

I understand it is a first but it needs work and lots of it so try another and post it, need help? as always I am here and on skype: AzoraiseGFX Any time I am on and free I will try and help.

- Matt

WaW_All_The_Time wrote Needs work dude, quite a bit of it too.

Lets start:

- Drop shadow is a good tool a VERY good tool but you have over used it and used it to much and frankly ruined your design with it. dim it down take some out.

- Try to fill the whole page if you are going to design it.

- Textures used art not very website friendly and the bolts are horrid there man fix that!

- Overall this need a re vamp with cleaner font and better layer styles, everything just looks out of place and needs to be fully fixed.

I understand it is a first but it needs work and lots of it so try another and post it, need help? as always I am here and on skype: AzoraiseGFX Any time I am on and free I will try and help.

- Matt

Alright I fixed those and made them look nicer how else can I improve?

- Text still looks blurry

- bevel doesn't look to pleasant try to make it so it is used for lighting instead and bring the top angle to 90 might sort it out.

- Logo is a bit to big and looks to drop shadowed again :/

- The bar at the bottom looks very bad I think try taking the overlay off it and try to change it up along with top nav bar.

- Just look at existing sites and work from there.

- Matt

WaW_All_The_Time wrote - Text still looks blurry

- bevel doesn't look to pleasant try to make it so it is used for lighting instead and bring the top angle to 90 might sort it out.

- Logo is a bit to big and looks to drop shadowed again :/

- The bar at the bottom looks very bad I think try taking the overlay off it and try to change it up along with top nav bar.

- Just look at existing sites and work from there.

- Matt

Thanks for being the only person who helped

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2/10 TBH that might be the simplest website design i have ever seen, put some effort into it and be creative

Got to agree with WaW.

The blur/outerglow and font ruin the piece massively.

If used correctly these things can really make a page pop, sadly it isn't on this one.

Get rid of all blur.
Get rid of the patterns/Textures.
Sort the colours out, black and great are highly unappealing.

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2/10 TBH that might be the simplest website design i have ever seen, put some effort into it and be creative

Sharpshooter shut up. You're mad because you can't take criticism. And for a first attempt though its not amazing I would still like to see you do better.

-Arf- wrote Got to agree with WaW.

The blur/outerglow and font ruin the piece massively.

If used correctly these things can really make a page pop, sadly it isn't on this one.

Get rid of all blur.
Get rid of the patterns/Textures.
Sort the colours out, black and great are highly unappealing.

Thanks for the feedback arf Hopefully my next attempt is better

Yeh bro this needs alot of improvments, arf and waw have named probaly all of them but il give you some.

Vary your colors, just black and grey looks really ugly and unnappealing.

You have overused the drop shadow, take it off all the text or lower.

The bevel is horrible and overused, makes it look very tacky.

Also, maybe try some different fonts wich match the theme.

Hope to see a v2