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Hey guys, can you guys rate my lore?
You wake up in a castle, you see great pictures of King Wonkee done by Da Vinci, you notice youre in his castle with several wounds............. you are a Vagrant most ranks above you think your a pathetic fighter. King Wonkee approaches you and says You, peasant, I thank you for saving my life. with great respect. As he walks out the room you try to say something but it just swishes away. You try to remember what you did but you still cannot remember.. As you keep trying to think what you did, you fall into a deep sleep. You sleep for several hours having dreams about the Ender & Efreet clan.
You wake up by the Kings servant, Lussa and there is a Ceremony for you! This time you wake in a different room with a chest an armory, you get dressed with Leather armor. The king calls for you and you come in, everyone has a spasm and chants for you! King Wonkee proudly pronounces you a Warrior! You an Oath to protect King Wonkee, now you are sent on your first quest! *Quest: Go to barracks at Vindi city and get improved armor.* You go on out the castle door and you see great Wonders, buildings, arenas, and statues. The statues are PvP Legends of Frankydemon1996, EliteHiroki, jdyoungs, and realmatt10000, you look at all of them and decide which looks the best and which one died with honor, you choose realmatt10000 as your favorite (My personal favorite). You look at the signs and they lead you to the barracks. In the barracks you hear a big yell and smash..
You rush in and you see Teamjunior with a bloody hand. You ask what happens, he says I got jumped by a Ninja; no one knows who it is yet. Anyways I will be your tutor. You forget about what happened and you reach for iron armor on the wall. Your tutor, Teamjunior yells with furious rage What are you doing! you reply with fright Doing as King Wonkee said. Teamjunior says No, no, no, no. I must test your skills, head on out to the arena behind the barracks. *Quest: Go to the arena behind the barracks.* You head on out and Lord Teamjunior follows on out. The battle begins!
You and the Lord are still sparring through several hours, only you are sweating not your tutor. Teamjunior huffs out You have some fine skills young man, but not enough to buff me, TRY HARDER! You tackle Teamjunior and he is stunned! You ram your sword into Teamjuniors armor and a Sonicboom takes place! The sonicboom goes far as to the kings ears. You start to hear roaring! There is a Summoner of the Ender clan! An Ender dragon has been summoned, you must slay the dragon! Teamjunior has been hit very harsh from you, he says GO GET THE ARMOR HURRY! You rush to the barracks and get the armor on and an iron sword. After realmatt10000 calls to your aid at the Magetower where the dragon is attacking! *Several minutes later* you are on the bridge the dragon is heading after you! You turn back and stand your ground, the dragon rushs at you! Somehow you manage to jump out the way and cut a deep wound into the dragon. EliteHiroki says Youve taken the dragon down in one sidecut?!? You say nothing amazed at your action
*Weeks after*
*Hurray Hurray Hurray Hurray* Everybody is chanting your name! You feel like this is too soon, having another ceremony. In book of lores you are now pronounced as a Legend.
You wake up in a castle, you see great pictures of King Wonkee done by Da Vinci, you notice youre in his castle with several wounds............. you are a Vagrant most ranks above you think your a pathetic fighter. King Wonkee approaches you and says You, peasant, I thank you for saving my life. with great respect. As he walks out the room you try to say something but it just swishes away. You try to remember what you did but you still cannot remember.. As you keep trying to think what you did, you fall into a deep sleep. You sleep for several hours having dreams about the Ender & Efreet clan.
You wake up by the Kings servant, Lussa and there is a Ceremony for you! This time you wake in a different room with a chest an armory, you get dressed with Leather armor. The king calls for you and you come in, everyone has a spasm and chants for you! King Wonkee proudly pronounces you a Warrior! You an Oath to protect King Wonkee, now you are sent on your first quest! *Quest: Go to barracks at Vindi city and get improved armor.* You go on out the castle door and you see great Wonders, buildings, arenas, and statues. The statues are PvP Legends of Frankydemon1996, EliteHiroki, jdyoungs, and realmatt10000, you look at all of them and decide which looks the best and which one died with honor, you choose realmatt10000 as your favorite (My personal favorite). You look at the signs and they lead you to the barracks. In the barracks you hear a big yell and smash..
You rush in and you see Teamjunior with a bloody hand. You ask what happens, he says I got jumped by a Ninja; no one knows who it is yet. Anyways I will be your tutor. You forget about what happened and you reach for iron armor on the wall. Your tutor, Teamjunior yells with furious rage What are you doing! you reply with fright Doing as King Wonkee said. Teamjunior says No, no, no, no. I must test your skills, head on out to the arena behind the barracks. *Quest: Go to the arena behind the barracks.* You head on out and Lord Teamjunior follows on out. The battle begins!
You and the Lord are still sparring through several hours, only you are sweating not your tutor. Teamjunior huffs out You have some fine skills young man, but not enough to buff me, TRY HARDER! You tackle Teamjunior and he is stunned! You ram your sword into Teamjuniors armor and a Sonicboom takes place! The sonicboom goes far as to the kings ears. You start to hear roaring! There is a Summoner of the Ender clan! An Ender dragon has been summoned, you must slay the dragon! Teamjunior has been hit very harsh from you, he says GO GET THE ARMOR HURRY! You rush to the barracks and get the armor on and an iron sword. After realmatt10000 calls to your aid at the Magetower where the dragon is attacking! *Several minutes later* you are on the bridge the dragon is heading after you! You turn back and stand your ground, the dragon rushs at you! Somehow you manage to jump out the way and cut a deep wound into the dragon. EliteHiroki says Youve taken the dragon down in one sidecut?!? You say nothing amazed at your action
*Weeks after*
*Hurray Hurray Hurray Hurray* Everybody is chanting your name! You feel like this is too soon, having another ceremony. In book of lores you are now pronounced as a Legend.
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What is a lore :trollin:
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Is this supposed to be a story
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-MyStic- wrote What is a lore :trollin:
A lore is like a folktale.
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