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-Naomi
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Hello Guys!

I made this desktop bg and i thought i'd share it with you guys!, constructive critisism please!

(I am the user -Naomi, i have just ran out of gold)

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Thanks Guys!


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I think it looks pretty good IMO. 6/10
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Horrible font and text. Use a simple font that's easy to read.(Also, use lighting and softboxes)

The plain green and white lines behind it make it look flat. Add some drop shadow make the white thinner. Also you can add some subtle patterns/textures.

Bad placed flare.
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-Naomi
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Xelev wrote Horrible font and text. Use a simple font that's easy to read.(Also, use lighting and softboxes)

The plain green and white lines behind it make it look flat. Add some drop shadow make the white thinner. Also you can add some subtle patterns/textures.

Bad placed flare.


At least your being honest , thanks for the tips!

Naomi
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5/10 don't like the font...
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Its pretty good but...

The white lines that cross through it make it look terrible
also use a simple font I notice you like to use graffiti fonts in a lot of your work you shouldn't do that.IMO
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Get them white stripes outta there homie.
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Thanks Guys!

I added another one but with some shadow on the stripes.

Naomi.
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cant tell a big difference but pretty good 8/10
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-Naomi
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TTG_HaZaRDXx wrote cant tell a big difference but pretty good 8/10



Thanks Hazard

Naomi..
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