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Poem about my dead bother please feedback?
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I have to say i have got more nice thoughts then i have in 2 months
i now know its going to be ok and i hopefully start to make friends and stop getting picked on slowly. thank whats your name for sharing it made me feel better because i know now people understand how much pain im in
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story. my brother danny went to iraq about 5 months ago and 2months ago i found out he was coming home, but no alive . my mother wont talk to me my dad has been yelling at me because before he left i said to him i hated him and made him really upset. i loved him some much its hard to type this while crying but im going to finish. we did everything together sports gaming everything he didnt tell me till the day he was leave what was going on this was after i heard about them bombing and stuff. i didnt mean it at all im failing school im on meds because i can be really happy and i think about him and i start to cry because i wrote him a letter and he wrote back its not worth the cost of stamps to write you if you hate me im going to died before you ever care about me.
my letter said i have it next to me ; danny you know that i didnt mean what was said i was just upset that you never told me and that you would go over there if i lose you im lost in this world with out you i really care about u i need to know that your ok im failing school i cant sleep constantly thinking about you i have cried some much by the end of the day i have to tears please let me know you ok over there.
i dont think i could ever forgive my self for say those 3 words but i thought i would share this poem with you guys i know im going to get made funny of but i dont care no im not asking for attention i just want to know if im the only person in this world that feels like this?
Life
Life is like a cig
it ends after a while
its burns at your soul
but you still stay strong
life ends like a cig
the users is unhappy for
a while after it ends
but life goes on
life begins like a cig
you open a box of death
life is a disease that
is going to kill you
life goes on no matter what
but yours made us stop
R.I.P Danny
you brother loves you
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i now know its going to be ok and i hopefully start to make friends and stop getting picked on slowly. thank whats your name for sharing it made me feel better because i know now people understand how much pain im in
please leave rude comments about me off
story. my brother danny went to iraq about 5 months ago and 2months ago i found out he was coming home, but no alive . my mother wont talk to me my dad has been yelling at me because before he left i said to him i hated him and made him really upset. i loved him some much its hard to type this while crying but im going to finish. we did everything together sports gaming everything he didnt tell me till the day he was leave what was going on this was after i heard about them bombing and stuff. i didnt mean it at all im failing school im on meds because i can be really happy and i think about him and i start to cry because i wrote him a letter and he wrote back its not worth the cost of stamps to write you if you hate me im going to died before you ever care about me.
my letter said i have it next to me ; danny you know that i didnt mean what was said i was just upset that you never told me and that you would go over there if i lose you im lost in this world with out you i really care about u i need to know that your ok im failing school i cant sleep constantly thinking about you i have cried some much by the end of the day i have to tears please let me know you ok over there.
i dont think i could ever forgive my self for say those 3 words but i thought i would share this poem with you guys i know im going to get made funny of but i dont care no im not asking for attention i just want to know if im the only person in this world that feels like this?
Life
Life is like a cig
it ends after a while
its burns at your soul
but you still stay strong
life ends like a cig
the users is unhappy for
a while after it ends
but life goes on
life begins like a cig
you open a box of death
life is a disease that
is going to kill you
life goes on no matter what
but yours made us stop
R.I.P Danny
you brother loves you
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i ill pray for him when i pray for my grandma. no ones going to make fun of you. F*ck them all
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Not making fun, but you win the award for most random topic subject ever
Hope your brother is R.I.P <3
Hope your brother is R.I.P <3
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Rhely wrote i ill pray for him when i pray for my grandma. no ones going to make fun of you. F*ck them allthank you so much ill pray for you grandma its just so hard not having anybody that understands me i have no friends i get picked on my mom only tells me to get up and go to bed, i asked my father to play catch with him he told me to tell danny you want to play
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I'm sorry about that. R.I.P to your bro!
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Bro i hear you, my brother died due to birth defects, and i know its nothing like you went through but i always wonder what he would be like, right now he should be turning 18 next october.
The hard thing is that he died on my birthday.
The hard thing is that he died on my birthday.
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He'll be in my prayers, R.I.P.
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Daftzy wrote Bro i hear you, my brother died due to birth defects, and i know its nothing like you went through but i always wonder what he would be like, right now he should be turning 18 next october.thank the lord somebody understands how hard it is ,i thank you for sharing this with me it make me feel better that im not alone r.i.p to your brother and you know what they shouldn't have killed whats his name i would have put him in front of a tv and have a meeting in usa while he is over there and have the familys that have lost a loved one and see the hurt in them then killed his ass so he sits in the ocean in hell with that thought
The hard thing is that he died on my birthday.
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I never get to see my brother anymore.
Not as bad as you, but I know how it feels.
-You've got my respect bro.
Not as bad as you, but I know how it feels.
-You've got my respect bro.
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im so sorry bro he done well serving our nation probally so sorry to hear
R.I.P
R.I.P
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