Editor wrote

Zork wrote Looks like crap TBH, no patterns on it just gradient overlays on square boxes, and that blue text is HORRIBLE.

it is a freaking web design. sorry that it doesn't have to have lighting and textures. also that blue text is an example. a filler.

now i know i said CnC but you don't have to be a **** about it.

I didnt say textures OR lighting. I said patterns, there is a huge difference. And im not being a d1ck, im saying the truth.

That is amazing dont listen to these people who dont have any clue about graphics. I like the clean look, but its almost too clean

Editor wrote

African wrote Sorry, but i dont like it at all.
It doesn't look like it would be on a website at all.

The shine on every button is bad, too much of it.
The RAIN3 text sticks out too much, its in the middle of nothing & should have something around it.

7/10

thanks for actually CnCing correctly lol. so about the shine... should i just completely get rid of it? also, the blue text is a filler. i will NOT have that on the actual website. don't worry.

Keep the shine on the top banner, and instead of having it go straight across the middle have it cut corner to corner like the box where you have the text.
Get rid of the shine on all the buttons & put gradients from a light blue to a little bit darker blue, not TOO Big of a gradient, just to add some effects to it.

Zork wrote

Editor wrote

Zork wrote Looks like crap TBH, no patterns on it just gradient overlays on square boxes, and that blue text is HORRIBLE.

it is a freaking web design. sorry that it doesn't have to have lighting and textures. also that blue text is an example. a filler.

now i know i said CnC but you don't have to be a **** about it.

I didnt say textures OR lighting. I said patterns, there is a huge difference. And im not being a d1ck, im saying the truth.

ok dude, you're right. i went off a little.

what all do you think i could change? i am pretty good at graphics, but web designs, i just suck. anymore advice? thanks.

-TTGxLeGaCy- wrote That is amazing dont listen to these people who dont have any clue about graphics. I like the clean look, but its almost too clean

Umm, we know much more about graphics than your sorry ass. And its not amasing, its somewhat ok, but needs lots of work.

Editor wrote

Zork wrote

Editor wrote

Zork wrote Looks like crap TBH, no patterns on it just gradient overlays on square boxes, and that blue text is HORRIBLE.

it is a freaking web design. sorry that it doesn't have to have lighting and textures. also that blue text is an example. a filler.

now i know i said CnC but you don't have to be a **** about it.

I didnt say textures OR lighting. I said patterns, there is a huge difference. And im not being a d1ck, im saying the truth.

ok dude, you're right. i went off a little.

what all do you think i could change? i am pretty good at graphics, but web designs, i just suck. anymore advice? thanks.

Its ok. Well first of all, text is not so webfriendly, you dont want something that is big and bold all the time, try Arial or Comfrota, or something like that. Gradient overlays should never be so big and full opacity, and try messing with small amounts of bevel to add that real life look. Try here: [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] and look for Baps web design tips

The glares don't really look nice imo, a nice dark to light gradient would be better. And web design usually looks better with a light grey or off white background instead of the dark grey.

Pretty good though, also I wouldn't use Bebas, it's too fat of a font for web design.

any fool can be good at gfx but it takes more to be a graphic artist. in this case web designer, i do quite a lot of web design myself what helped me was feedback from some great artists, mainly bap & theft. message them asking them what they think and im sure the will help you out, as will i.

but i must comment on how bad this work is, the dark, solid grey background really is bad and is on all website designs, try using a light grey gradient to give it a nicer look. try varying the fonts you use, the one on this is a really bad one for web design because it looks really basic and ruins work.

with the image slider try making the next & previous buttons smaller and perhaps go for a custom icon instead of the 2 arrows they look really bad.

i would go on but having to go out but message me anytime for help.

As for V2, the buttons shouldn't have an inner shadow imo because they are meant to click in.

Off topic, but it kind of reminded me of TTG lol