mrmacgee wrote It is good, but not great. I understand it is your first so here are some pointers:


1.Make it shorter... already pointed out by everyone
2.Only have the mirror effect on some moments that look good with it
3.Add some new effects to it

You did do an excellent job for your first one.






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I agree. The mirror effect gets boring very easily

Yeah and it makes it hard to see stuff in the video. You get distracted way to easily off of it and you tend to kinda forget about the gameplay or the actual video.







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mrmacgee wrote Yeah and it makes it hard to see stuff in the video. You get distracted way to easily off of it and you tend to kinda forget about the gameplay or the actual video.







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Well I just made a quick one Just rendering it as we speak Need more complements on how to Improve my Work Thanks for help people

Try adding more colors to it and add a lot more effects. Add the whole shabam in effects and I can gurantee you that it will be good if you know how to place them.








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mrmacgee wrote Try adding more colors to it and add a lot more effects. Add the whole shabam in effects and I can gurantee you that it will be good if you know how to place them.






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Ok well this one was a quick one i made 19 secs long Not all that but im going to make a Better one now with
loads of effects and All that JIBA lol Ill add it to the list

I think it is very good but you could use some effects tweeking like insert explosions or flaming letters something like that would really jazz it up

ExO_F3ARLESS wrote I think it is very good but you could use some effects tweeking like insert explosions or flaming letters something like that would really jazz it up

Just added my one i made now lol took like 3mins to make Tell me how to improve

the second one was rad i think you could have put gunshots in with the music that would be awesome!

sweet.

ExO_F3ARLESS wrote the second one was rad i think you could have put gunshots in with the music that would be awesome!

Editing it know lol READ the text it says the same thing 3 times i fooked it abit ill try add the gunshots