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themobsterxii
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hey guys if possible could u plz check out my new intro. and leave feedback if u like or not? its the batman styled writing.

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nice but on your montage 2nd clip please i meen please change your name from FaZe
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-Liaaaaam wrote nice but on your montage 2nd clip please i meen please change your name from FaZe


hah yeh iknow i made that a month ago with the free one month. got someone on here 2 do system link for it.

my normal gamertag is THE MoBsTeR XII. thanks for the feedback
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the intro is nice its easy to read and nicely rendered
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WormGrafiks wrote the intro is nice its easy to read and nicely rendered



thanks i appreciate feedback its a lot better than my first one.
first one only took me like 15mins
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8/10

Looks nice and channel is DOINGGG IT!
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Hey nice intro but it lags at the end you might want to fasten up the part where the 2 doors close.

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good for your first one.
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its ok not to bad but not really good but better then what i can do haha 7/10
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good job there, id give it a 8/10
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