I would go with a different font, maybe something bolder with smaller text for the subtitle. Perhaps even have the text where it appears interactive with the setting, have it appear as though it's sli ...

I'd center the text on the screen and stick with one font for all the text involved. Also adding some fx to make it lightly glow would be nice.

thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it (:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BivSg2V5D2c

there is a link to my last video, because for some reason i cannot get a channel link so there ya go, see you at 10.

Hey guys thanks for stopping in, I just finished my first attempt at a video introduction, please check it out and I leave feedback!

The video it is for will be up at 10 tonight. If you guys are cu ...

I've never gotten into skateboarding simply for the reason itself that I cannot do it! xD
10/10 way to go and Id like to see some more.

Check out the new trailer I just uploaded for my channel. thanks

if you want to be kind and leave feedback below tahtd be awesome, thanks again
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BivSg2V5D2c

do another one soon? That'd be awesome! I just missed out on this giveaway. Thanks

I checked out the video and enjoyed the funny commentary, left a like and subbed keep up the good work man.

I am recently starting my grind for 100 subs xD

https://www.twitch.tv/imcroosh

join me I am grinding for killstreaks and next prestige

thanks!

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