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A little slower than what I'm used to but still sounded good dude. I like the beat it had.
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It's alright. If youre gonna have a long intro beat. DON'T PUT YOUR MUSIC HALFWAY though it and make way more lyrics. You had 39 seconds of the beat and 29 seconds of your flow. Its just not gonna be something. You want at least 1:10 of lyrics in a song. This is a snippet. Add more. Talk about more than drugs.
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-Backwoods wrote It's alright. If youre gonna have a long intro beat. DON'T PUT YOUR MUSIC HALFWAY though it and make way more lyrics. You had 39 seconds of the beat and 29 seconds of your flow. Its just not gonna be something. You want at least 1:10 of lyrics in a song. This is a snippet. Add more. Talk about more than drugs.
Thanks for the feedback. I will use the tips next time i recorded something.
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i really liked it bro it was too short tho!
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Was a little slow at first but then i started to enjoy it alot more as i was listing to it. Keep up the great work mate, and looking forward to hearing more from you.
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Really laid back, I like it. Not exactly my taste, but it is good. I would work a little on the mixing a bit more, and equalize it a little more, though. Still pretty good work.
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If you need someone to mix it for you, hit me up.
All in all it's okay, lil short on lyrics but yeah, you gotta start somewhere right?
All in all it's okay, lil short on lyrics but yeah, you gotta start somewhere right?
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Mike wrote i really liked it bro it was too short tho!
Thanks for the feedback, that was only a snippet of the song.
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