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Help me with this song?
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I found a beat while watching a livestream and I'm absolutely in love with it and I want to make a song with it. Although, i've only been able to come up with the Chorus. I need a verse from 43 seconds to like 1:27 and it has to go along with the song. If you could help me out, that'd be great and I'd love to shoutout you out on it and stuff.
The song is going to be called life goes on and it's about I guess just life going on after a bad breakup or something bad in life.
Here's the beat
Here's the chorus I have
Life goes on I'm just tryna play the part/
Feeling her body move like she's a work of art/
You only want the end when you weren't here at the start/
And I'm feeling all this change, but it wasn't from the heart/
Face it, it's the problems we always facing/
Pushing me away, when you wanted all the chasing/
Gracious, I'm just living kinda anxious, but I guess love never makes sense/
The song is going to be called life goes on and it's about I guess just life going on after a bad breakup or something bad in life.
Here's the beat
Here's the chorus I have
Life goes on I'm just tryna play the part/
Feeling her body move like she's a work of art/
You only want the end when you weren't here at the start/
And I'm feeling all this change, but it wasn't from the heart/
Face it, it's the problems we always facing/
Pushing me away, when you wanted all the chasing/
Gracious, I'm just living kinda anxious, but I guess love never makes sense/
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clingy (02-10-2017)
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I've listen to this beat over and over again, its mesmerising. You're chorus is great, I even rapped it whenever I was just listening lol, but once this is finished this will be dope.
I've wrote little shit verse's before and I'm not some upcoming rapper or anything I've just done it out of entertainment but I'll try help with a few lines lmao
I've wrote little shit verse's before and I'm not some upcoming rapper or anything I've just done it out of entertainment but I'll try help with a few lines lmao
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i'd love some help! thanks
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