Visxal wrote

Stro wrote Looks quite boring tbh. I don't understand the design. Colors are weird, and there is nothing really interesting that pops out.

4/10

Thanks for the feedback, ill take all of that into consideration apart from the thing you said about the colours as it's in a desert so i'm sorry for not putting multi coloured sand and rainbow unicorns everywhere...

No he has a point. Don't ask for criticism if you can't take it. It's too bright, even though it's a desert setting it's difficult to even make out what's going on. The C4D work is interesting I'll give you that, but it's just that, some text and by the looks of things some textures that have been thrown over the top.

Unfold wrote

Visxal wrote

Stro wrote Looks quite boring tbh. I don't understand the design. Colors are weird, and there is nothing really interesting that pops out.

4/10

Thanks for the feedback, ill take all of that into consideration apart from the thing you said about the colours as it's in a desert so i'm sorry for not putting multi coloured sand and rainbow unicorns everywhere...

No he has a point. Don't ask for criticism if you can't take it. It's too bright, even though it's a desert setting it's difficult to even make out what's going on. The C4D work is interesting I'll give you that, but it's just that, some text and by the looks of things some textures that have been thrown over the top.

Now that's proper criticism thanks.

Wow that looks pretty dope.

Okay heres my review, personally I think the logo is a little basic its just the logo with basic white and a 3d depth. Not going to lie I do like the somewhat desert effect you have gone for however it could be improved with a little bit different colours that blend.
Im not to sure what was going on with the colt text on the header, [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] The C looks like it has just been slapped there due to the black outline on the end of the C.
I'm just trying to help

Visxal wrote

Unfold wrote

Visxal wrote

Stro wrote Looks quite boring tbh. I don't understand the design. Colors are weird, and there is nothing really interesting that pops out.

4/10

Thanks for the feedback, ill take all of that into consideration apart from the thing you said about the colours as it's in a desert so i'm sorry for not putting multi coloured sand and rainbow unicorns everywhere...

No he has a point. Don't ask for criticism if you can't take it. It's too bright, even though it's a desert setting it's difficult to even make out what's going on. The C4D work is interesting I'll give you that, but it's just that, some text and by the looks of things some textures that have been thrown over the top.

Now that's proper criticism thanks.

No worries mate, just need to accept all criticism and work around it and it'll help you improve, same goes for every graphics designer.

First off I am going to give my overall rating and unfortunately it is a 4/10. I don't want you to have false thoughts about your work becuase you won't ever improve if someone does not honestly tell you the way it looks. There are a lot of people on here that just say "10/10" or "Looks amazing" and we all know that that never helps anyone. I apologize for my rant but now it's time for the review.

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First off I am only saying what's wrong, not what you did right. First thing I noticed is that it isn't very eye catching and it is almost hard to look at. The CCs are the main issue here. Too much contrast, brightness and it is very uneven as far as lighting goes. The shading does not look very realistic, it's kinda all over the place. You need to decide where the sun is and stick with it. Also the "Colt" on the snake blends way too much (on the twitter header)! The screen effect or whatever its called needs a little bit more tweaking. There's a few other things I could mention but let's just stick with this for now.

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Note: I can't confirm this exactly but I work with twitter headers quite a bit and half of the bottom text would end up being cut off. It's just the way twitter resides there headers.

Edit: Spelling error

I'll just say what no ones said yet.

I would fix the avatar, instead of just having it as a crop out from the original image.
Try getting creative with it instead of having it as it is now.

Tbh it just looks like you threw a CC on top of it, try turning that CC down and let us know how it looks. I'm almost 100% certain you threw a CC on there.

I like the design of it, but this is old as people has said but doesn't mean your design is worthless/crap. Not sure why there's a red outline for this revamp. Doesn't go well in my books. Also the brightness is too bright in my opinion. The C4D work is great. Keep it p dude.