Hey man, here's some constructive criticism.

Within the first 30 seconds of this video: , I realized I was not going to subscribe to your channel or watch any more videos from you for a couple of reasons. Those being:

1. "Hey guys, what is up, *insert youtube name* (Mr. Voidable) here" - I wish I could explain adequately why I dislike this so much, but I guess the only reasonable explanation is that this is the most unoriginal introduction to a youtube video ever. You have to catch your viewer's attention within the first sentence or people will not watch your video. I am not trying to be extra critical, I just watch way too much youtube to waste time on videos I don't think will entertain me. And I don't consider myself to be biased, I like to watch minecraft content actually. Even if you kept the beginning words the same, if you added some enthusiasm or showed any excitement at all actually, you would be better off and I probably wouldn't be writing this.

2. "I know I haven't uploaded in a while, but yeah, my life has been crap for the past few months." - Even though the introduction was really stale, I decided to see what was next. I made a mistake. Everybody's life is crap, it's life. I'm not sure what your goal was of sharing your personal life to your youtube audience, maybe sympathy, idk. But anyways that was a huge downside for me so I clicked off.

Good luck in the future, hopefully you don't make these same mistakes in your future videos. Perhaps maybe you'll even come to the realization that youtube is not for everybody, it takes a specific type of passion to successfully run a youtube channel. I certainly don't have it, that's why I just watch youtube and don't make videos . Maybe try streaming?

Thanks for the feedback man

No problem. Again, wasn't trying to be harsh just wanted to be real with you man, figured it could only help.