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thoughts on new website project draft (feedback please)
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basically i am developing a website devoted to skin care for fun
let me know what you think please, here is a draft of the home page, all fully functioning so far
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no overly harsh comments please as I am lacking motivation as it is, just looking for some general feedback and any constructive ideas, thank you!
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let me know what you think please, here is a draft of the home page, all fully functioning so far
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no overly harsh comments please as I am lacking motivation as it is, just looking for some general feedback and any constructive ideas, thank you!
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Honestly it's looking good except for a few small details.
Skincare.org at the top needs a new font.
the "g" in org looks aweful.
On "we care about skincare!" I'd increase the interval on the spacing a little bit. The letters seem pretty tight.
The tan-ish color of the background doesn't sit nicely with the blue in my opinion.
So I'd either change the blue, or the background color.
The outlines on the 2 blue boxes and 3 blue circles look very bad.
Leave them without an outline it looks so much cleaner, smoother, and just all around nicer.
Skincare.org at the top needs a new font.
the "g" in org looks aweful.
On "we care about skincare!" I'd increase the interval on the spacing a little bit. The letters seem pretty tight.
The tan-ish color of the background doesn't sit nicely with the blue in my opinion.
So I'd either change the blue, or the background color.
The outlines on the 2 blue boxes and 3 blue circles look very bad.
Leave them without an outline it looks so much cleaner, smoother, and just all around nicer.
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