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Yhorm (09-18-2015)
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like the beat its a change, soft and melodic.
Im aware the gear isnt top notch but its not bad, sure youre new and you need to improve but as a start I see it. Gotta work on flow and clearer delivery. Read over your bars more and improve on rhyme layout.
Also a cleaner ending would be nice too, an abrupt ending like that, that leaves you hanging is kinda off putting.
Im aware the gear isnt top notch but its not bad, sure youre new and you need to improve but as a start I see it. Gotta work on flow and clearer delivery. Read over your bars more and improve on rhyme layout.
Also a cleaner ending would be nice too, an abrupt ending like that, that leaves you hanging is kinda off putting.
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i like the track. keep it up, will keep eye on your sound cloud for future tracks
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ExquisiteNadine wrote i like the track. keep it up, will keep eye on your sound cloud for future tracks
Thank you I appreciate it. Feel free to follow me so you can get notifications for future tracks!
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Qwel wrote like the beat its a change, soft and melodic.
Im aware the gear isnt top notch but its not bad, sure youre new and you need to improve but as a start I see it. Gotta work on flow and clearer delivery. Read over your bars more and improve on rhyme layout.
Also a cleaner ending would be nice too, an abrupt ending like that, that leaves you hanging is kinda off putting.
Thank you for this. I am working on memorizing my verses and choruses so it sounds more free sounding.
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ExquisiteNadine wrote i like the track. keep it up, will keep eye on your sound cloud for future trackstracks good beats sick but there's always room for improvement
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I really dig the beat, man. But like Qwel or whatever is name is, if you work on your flow and clearness, you will be goin' places. Keep it up, I will definitely be watching your Soundcloud for future tracks. You have potential.
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Xur-IX wrotePROMUT wrote snip
I really dig the beat, man. But like Qwel or whatever is name is, if you work on your flow and clearness, you will be goin' places. Keep it up, I will definitely be watching your Soundcloud for future tracks. You have potential.
- Xur, Agent of the Nine
Thank you so much! I appreciate this a ton. Feel free to follow for future songs!
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Cxtler wroteExquisiteNadine wrote i like the track. keep it up, will keep eye on your sound cloud for future trackstracks good beats sick but there's always room for improvement
Thats true! Thanks for the feedback.
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