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I had another topic showing some of the 1st steps of my piece. Check it out here:
https://www.thetechgame.com/Forums/t=7255151/first-proper-illustration-not-finished.html

Anyway this topic is to show my final work


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It looks like he has no lenses in has glasses and the wrinkles on his collar are a bit off, I think like a greyish color on the collar is bit better for the tone of the picture, and I can't really tell if you meant to tilt his head on purpose or not, and his right ear is a bit off on the shading inside of the ear, but not for that great piece man.
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Motts wrote It looks like he has no lenses in has glasses and the wrinkles on his collar are a bit off, I think like a greyish color on the collar is bit better for the tone of the picture, and I can't really tell if you meant to tilt his head on purpose or not, and his right ear is a bit off on the shading inside of the ear, but not for that great piece man.

That's how it was on the original.

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I can see where you are going, you should have posted the original so people can have a better comparison to yours. Seeing it now the frame of the glasses are like a brownish and that would make it easier to see the eyebrows from the inside of the glasses, and you are still lacking some details from the right ear but very very minimal good piece man.
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Moths, I modified the picture according to what you suggested. I gave the glasses very subtle lenses, I applied extra detail to the right ear and I darkened the collar . I edited it into the main topic.
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This is a really nice piece. The only thing that seems off to me are the sideburns. The one on the left is shorter than the other. Other than that, great work!
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Some work on the lower eye lashes maybe, i like it though man nice job on this one
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MickersRevoltv3 wrote Some work on the lower eye lashes maybe, i like it though man nice job on this one

Yeah I wasn't too sure on how to go about doing the eyelashes. I'll watch some tutorials and apply some new techniques to my future work Thanks.
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Nice job Prohibit, I like this!
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