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I thinks it would sound better if it said this.
Our hearts are animals, that's why they're in cages.
Our hearts are animals, that's why they're in cages.
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CriticaI wrote I thinks it would sound better if it said this.
Our hearts are animals, that's why they're in cages.
hearts aren't actually animals. you need to add "like" to compare it to something else. this isn't my quote anyways.
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Perverse wroteCriticaI wrote I thinks it would sound better if it said this.
Our hearts are animals, that's why they're in cages.
hearts aren't actually animals. you need to add "like" to compare it to something else. this isn't my quote anyways.
It's a metaphor
You don't have to use like
if you don't want to
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A left alignment on the text would look a lot better here IMO, and this fo' sho' can be an album cover and if you want to see it as one just message me.
Otherwise its an ill piece and quite well executed all around, big ups.
Otherwise its an ill piece and quite well executed all around, big ups.
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Zef wrote A left alignment on the text would look a lot better here IMO, and this fo' sho' can be an album cover and if you want to see it as one just message me.
Otherwise its an ill piece and quite well executed all around, big ups.
hell yeah i want to see this as an album cover , ill message you in a minute
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