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I never really rap but i was just jotting stuff for like 5 mins and thiught of this i would like some of your oppinions because i would like to know if i can be good.

I spit on these emcees
Like im jayz
Cause he aint better then me
At Any time i can just busta rhyme
And everyone will be crying
Like I comitted a crime
This rap shit is just easy
Their bars are so cheesey
And its obsurd
How my mixtape doesnt have the publicity that it deserves
Shits a joke
Like how i was born from a condom that broke.
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To be honest it's not that good man, sorry.
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Alexis_Sanchez wrote To be honest it's not that good man, sorry.

Thanx for being honest dude lol
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wow a little harsh but um idk how to rate these

rate mine now

Ice cream trucks, I chase that
Two shoes, I lace that
Chunk Dirty, I dump that
Justin Beiber, I bump that
Glasses jacket shirt man, I call me Winner
And after I win, I eat my dinner
But I'm not a rapper

-supahotfire
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-Jeub wrote
Alexis_Sanchez wrote To be honest it's not that good man, sorry.

Thanx for being honest dude lol
It is best to be honest right? I wasn't being mean or anything.
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Alexis_Sanchez wrote
-Jeub wrote
Alexis_Sanchez wrote To be honest it's not that good man, sorry.

Thanx for being honest dude lol
It is best to be honest right? I wasn't being mean or anything.


Ikik man all good in the hood
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i guess my bars are not good enough i cri evry tim so lemme drop this last bar

When I park my car, I pull up the e-brake
You hear that? I'm buzzin';
Big family, no cousins
I get money. It's nothin'

Twelve job applications, all blank: I'm lazy
Two baby sitters, no babies
I spit hot fire, but I'm not a rapper
I come with the Supa Hot
And then bring the fire right after!
- supa hot fire
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