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Hey there friends,
now I was going over this awesome, I mean 'ultimate', guide that Zef has taken his time to help young graphic designers as myself.
Ultimate Guide - By Zef
In the guide he has 3 steps to work on to be a great designer, and the first step is "The Inspiration Duplicator". Basically you find a piece of work you like and try your best to duplicate it and make it your own at the same time.
This is what I came up with and I'd like to thank Zef for the awesome guide and the inspiration art.


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Looks really clean, might go through his 'ultimate guide' myself
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Wow that actually looks really good,
Might try one out my self.
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Pretty good, a few things that can use some change would be the blending. If you look at mine, inside 'the world' the images are of similar CC and they match the background. If you look at yours, the inside is very bright where the background is very dark, blending is all about the layers between shading.
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Zef wrote Pretty good, a few things that can use some change would be the blending. If you look at mine, inside 'the world' the images are of similar CC and they match the background. If you look at yours, the inside is very bright where the background is very dark, blending is all about the layers between shading.
Thanks for the great feedback Zef, and I fixed up a bit. What do you all think? I think my weakness is blending and making everything look like it belongs together, in most of my works.
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czr wrote
Zef wrote Pretty good, a few things that can use some change would be the blending. If you look at mine, inside 'the world' the images are of similar CC and they match the background. If you look at yours, the inside is very bright where the background is very dark, blending is all about the layers between shading.
Thanks for the great feedback Zef, and I fixed up a bit. What do you all think? I think my weakness is blending and making everything look like it belongs together, in most of my works.


Blending is one criteria of skill, it comes in time. My best advice is pay attention to every detail and imagine every aspect of real life in the situation. Light, shadows, focus, shading, depth; all things that if you observe a well shot photograph you will see.
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Zef wrote
czr wrote
Zef wrote Pretty good, a few things that can use some change would be the blending. If you look at mine, inside 'the world' the images are of similar CC and they match the background. If you look at yours, the inside is very bright where the background is very dark, blending is all about the layers between shading.
Thanks for the great feedback Zef, and I fixed up a bit. What do you all think? I think my weakness is blending and making everything look like it belongs together, in most of my works.


Blending is one criteria of skill, it comes in time. My best advice is pay attention to every detail and imagine every aspect of real life in the situation. Light, shadows, focus, shading, depth; all things that if you observe a well shot photograph you will see.
Thanks for the awesome advice Zef
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