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A storm just hit today and the power has been coming and going today at my house.
So as you can imagine I had a lot of free time and I've been very very bored...

This is what a day of boredom has help me create. I really don't know what it is or what I was going for. I just turned up the music and worked on something. I wanna know what you all think about it, so maybe another time I can actually make something good out of this.

The heads are suppose to be in some sorta cube traveling through space..


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I feel like this is a little too bland for my taste. The heads are just sort of sitting there in space with no real meaning behind them as to how they got there or anything.

As for creativity, I feel that you did a great job on this being original and what not.
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This definitely has potential, i really like the idea mate. What i was thinking was trying to join the boxes up with 1 stroke lines. The whole poster, at the end, could do with some polishing as well. (Colors, sharpness)
Idk if your going to work some more on this, but kep the posters up man.

PS: Never put your name in big text on posters, it completely ruins them. Just put it in really small white text in the corner (i mean really small, but readable) or no text at all.
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planky wrote This definitely has potential, i really like the idea mate. What i was thinking was trying to join the boxes up with 1 stroke lines. The whole poster, at the end, could do with some polishing as well. (Colors, sharpness)
Idk if your going to work some more on this, but kep the posters up man.

PS: Never put your name in big text on posters, it completely ruins them. Just put it in really small white text in the corner (i mean really small, but readable) or no text at all.

Thanks for the critique and feedback planky, I took what you said and fixed it up a bit. What do you all think?
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Yeh mate definitely better, it flows more. Im about to go out now but tomorrow il have a mess around with it and show you some techniques if you want
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Nice Edit. Made the face look way more realistic. and I like the repetition you used.
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planky wrote Yeh mate definitely better, it flows more. Im about to go out now but tomorrow il have a mess around with it and show you some techniques if you want
Yeah that sounds awesome man!
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