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Head Turn/Lip Sync Tests
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Hello I believe this is my first post on here! Okay guys I want some honest feedback... I am going to be posting two videos both of them have a head turn and lip sync.. The first one is a character I drew from a anime series called CLANNAD and the character is Nagisa Furukawa and the second one I drew the character from Elfen Lied and I took the audio from the last episode I believe. Anyways I want honest opinions on both of them since they are my first test with Anime Studio Pro 10... Also some tips and advice if there is any. Also for the Elfen Lied one I know the shading is horribly off but that's because I stopped working on the shading on the last part and I also acknowledge the very thick outlines as well. Also for both of them I noticed the bumps and such.. I just wanted to focus on the animation before the actual character drawings. The reason I want advice is because I want to create my own anime series and I wanted to start off by posting these. Also I did create the background as well. I need some tips and advice for both if there is any.
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On the first one with the head turn her head seems to kind of "transform". I suspect that it's due to the lack of shading in the hair. If you were to add in some darker colors to give the hair more depth it wouldn't seem so much like her head is changing shape when she moves (I think).
The second one looks pretty good in my uneducated opinion, you said something about the drawing not being your best quality because you were focusing on the animation itself, but I think that the drop in quality on the drawing is really the only thing that brings this one down.
The second one looks pretty good in my uneducated opinion, you said something about the drawing not being your best quality because you were focusing on the animation itself, but I think that the drop in quality on the drawing is really the only thing that brings this one down.
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