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#71. Posted:
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Anyone wanna start this again?
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Anything i spit is so unfair and real
If you catch a glimpse of what i have you might just wanna get down and kneel
All these big companies trying to sign me and give the biggest deal
You tried to compete with the tippy top but you fell just like the three musketeers

Your flow is wack
If you dont have anybody watching your back
You might just get hit with the glocks and the macs

I'm a murderer when it comes to rap battles
You can call me the zodiac killer
By the time i get done saying this all it might just sink in a little bit thicker
Remember things are not as they appear to be until you look in the mirror
Before you join the game you might want to consider
I'm at the top and your on the bottom and i can still here whimper
#73. Posted:
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Vistruhh wrote Anything i spit is so unfair and real
If you catch a glimpse of what i have you might just wanna get down and kneel
All these big companies trying to sign me and give the biggest deal
You tried to compete with the tippy top but you fell just like the three musketeers

Your flow is wack
If you dont have anybody watching your back
You might just get hit with the glocks and the macs

I'm a murderer when it comes to rap battles
You can call me the zodiac killer
By the time i get done saying this all it might just sink in a little bit thicker
Remember things are not as they appear to be until you look in the mirror
Before you join the game you might want to consider
I'm at the top and your on the bottom and i can still here whimper


i run the game you can't stop the owner
you say your hard but can't even pop a Bon*r

your a n*gga and im in the klu klux klan
im gonna hunt you down in any way that i can

no matter what i try to make a quick buck
you a b*tch
homie how much for a d*ck suck

cooking up rhymes like a kitchen
you say your real but what you represent is fiction

when it comes to these rhymes i'm a lyrical thug
i'm so sick i couldn't be cured by a miracle drug
#74. Posted:
gmlukens
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Wrote this in like 5 mins, nbd.

Look, if you had one shot, or one opportunity
To seize everything you ever wanted. one moment
Would you capture it or just let it slip?
Yo

His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking how, everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up, over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Easy, no
He won't have it, he knows his whole back's to these ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that but he's broke
He's so stagnant, he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again, yo
This whole rhapsody
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him

[Hook:]
You better lose yourself in the music, the moment
You own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
This opportunity comes once in a lifetime yo
You better lose yourself in the music, the moment
You own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
This opportunity comes once in a lifetime yo
(You better)

The soul's escaping, through this hole that is gaping
This world is mine for the taking
Make me king, as we move toward a new world order
A normal life is boring, but superstardom's close to post mortem
It only grows harder, homie grows hotter
He blows. It's all over. These hoes is all on him
Coast to coast shows, he's known as the globetrotter
Lonely roads, God only knows
He's grown farther from home, he's no father
He goes home and barely knows his own daughter
But hold your nose 'cause here goes the cold water
His hoes don't want him no more, he's cold product
They moved on to the next schmoe who flows
He nose dove and sold nada
So the soap opera is told and unfolds
I suppose it's old partner but the beat goes on
Da da dum da dum da da

[Hook]

No more games, I'ma change what you call rage
Tear this **** roof off like two dogs caged
I was playing in the beginning, the mood all changed
I've been chewed up and spat out and booed off stage
But I kept rhyming and stepped right into the next cypher
Best believe somebody's paying the pied piper
All the pain inside amplified by the fact
That I can't get by with my 9 to 5
And I can't provide the right type of life for my family
Cause man, these goddamn food stamps don't buy diapers
And it's no movie, there's no Mekhi Phifer, this is my life
And these times are so hard, and it's getting even harder
Trying to feed and water my seed, plus
Teeter totter caught up between being a father and a prima donna
Baby mama drama's screaming on and
Too much for me to wanna
Stay in one spot, another day of monotony
Has gotten me to the point, I'm like a snail
I've got to formulate a plot or I end up in jail or shot
Success is my only **** option, failure's not
Mom, I love you, but this trailer's got to go
I cannot grow old in Salem's lot
So here I go it's my shot.
Feet, fail me not, this may be the only opportunity that I got

[Hook]

You can do anything you set your mind to, man
#75. Posted:
F-18
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18tylerweeks wrote
F-18 wrote Come at me man, this should be interesting.


Are you kidding me you name is f18,
but you probably take it up the a*s from charley sheen

i bet you skinny as a stick
how bout you hurry up finish f*ckin suckin your dads ****
Here we go,
tyler18weeks is thinking he's bold,
when in reality your 13 years old,
now I know you think you're hard,
but bi*ch you give head on the schoolyard,
Talking about being a rapper cuz you dressed as a Hershey Bar for Halloween,
You're rhymes are trash but cant expect more from a small teen
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You think your cool but I like cats you better step back before I hit you with a bat
#77. Posted:
Nodus
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doges wrote Wrote this in like 5 mins, nbd.

Look, if you had one shot, or one opportunity
To seize everything you ever wanted. one moment
Would you capture it or just let it slip?
Yo

His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking how, everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up, over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Easy, no
He won't have it, he knows his whole back's to these ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that but he's broke
He's so stagnant, he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again, yo
This whole rhapsody
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him

[Hook:]
You better lose yourself in the music, the moment
You own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
This opportunity comes once in a lifetime yo
You better lose yourself in the music, the moment
You own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
This opportunity comes once in a lifetime yo
(You better)

The soul's escaping, through this hole that is gaping
This world is mine for the taking
Make me king, as we move toward a new world order
A normal life is boring, but superstardom's close to post mortem
It only grows harder, homie grows hotter
He blows. It's all over. These hoes is all on him
Coast to coast shows, he's known as the globetrotter
Lonely roads, God only knows
He's grown farther from home, he's no father
He goes home and barely knows his own daughter
But hold your nose 'cause here goes the cold water
His hoes don't want him no more, he's cold product
They moved on to the next schmoe who flows
He nose dove and sold nada
So the soap opera is told and unfolds
I suppose it's old partner but the beat goes on
Da da dum da dum da da

[Hook]

No more games, I'ma change what you call rage
Tear this **** roof off like two dogs caged
I was playing in the beginning, the mood all changed
I've been chewed up and spat out and booed off stage
But I kept rhyming and stepped right into the next cypher
Best believe somebody's paying the pied piper
All the pain inside amplified by the fact
That I can't get by with my 9 to 5
And I can't provide the right type of life for my family
Cause man, these ******* food stamps don't buy diapers
And it's no movie, there's no Mekhi Phifer, this is my life
And these times are so hard, and it's getting even harder
Trying to feed and water my seed, plus
Teeter totter caught up between being a father and a prima donna
Baby mama drama's screaming on and
Too much for me to wanna
Stay in one spot, another day of monotony
Has gotten me to the point, I'm like a snail
I've got to formulate a plot or I end up in jail or shot
Success is my only **** option, failure's not
Mom, I love you, but this trailer's got to go
I cannot grow old in Salem's lot
So here I go it's my shot.
Feet, fail me not, this may be the only opportunity that I got

[Hook]

You can do anything you set your mind to, man
That's all copied from Lose Yourself- Eminem so you didn't make any of it -_- ....


@18tylerweeks Make a rap about me
#78. Posted:
WWNPJJ
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18tylerweeks wrote
Boar wrote
I didn't see your picture
Because I don't look at the loser exhibition
I see my rhymes get you hot under the collar
Words like fission

Put me 10 feet down?
For that you'd need a shovel
Call me when you get one
And dig out of your hovel

Half your age? Welcome to this world
Maybe at 34 your rhymes can get unfurled
You try to rap at your age, and don't do it good
I hunt you like you're templar, and I'm dark brotherhood

Give up now, you look like a clown
Go back into your hole, Frodo
I'm a vet, you're a pet
And I just put you down


**** homo, little maggot,
you cant hack it
justins gay, you're a f*ggot!
At least he admits it, dont even risk it
This guy's starvin to death
someone get him a biscuit
I don't know what they told you Boar
You must had them controlls rolled too tight
You look like a pissed off rapper who never made it
Hey, why you such a f*cking gay guy, G?
When really you're the one who's got the HIV
Man, I'm done with this clown,
he's soft
**** it,
I'll let my home girl finish you off


Isn't that freestyle from 8 mile? Lol
#79. Posted:
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18tylerweeks wrote
Boar wrote
I didn't see your picture
Because I don't look at the loser exhibition
I see my rhymes get you hot under the collar
Words like fission

Put me 10 feet down?
For that you'd need a shovel
Call me when you get one
And dig out of your hovel

Half your age? Welcome to this world
Maybe at 34 your rhymes can get unfurled
You try to rap at your age, and don't do it good
I hunt you like you're templar, and I'm dark brotherhood

Give up now, you look like a clown
Go back into your hole, Frodo
I'm a vet, you're a pet
And I just put you down


**** homo, little maggot,
you cant hack it
justins gay, you're a f*ggot!
At least he admits it, dont even risk it
This guy's starvin to death
someone get him a biscuit
I don't know what they told you Boar
You must had them controlls rolled too tight
You look like a pissed off rapper who never made it
Hey, why you such a f*cking gay guy, G?
When really you're the one who's got the HIV
Man, I'm done with this clown,
he's soft
**** it,
I'll let my home girl finish you off


Isn't that freestyle from 8 mile? Lol
#80. Posted:
Splashy-Fish
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Nodus wrote [spoil]
doges wrote Wrote this in like 5 mins, nbd.

Look, if you had one shot, or one opportunity
To seize everything you ever wanted. one moment
Would you capture it or just let it slip?
Yo

His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking how, everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up, over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Easy, no
He won't have it, he knows his whole back's to these ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that but he's broke
He's so stagnant, he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again, yo
This whole rhapsody
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him

[Hook:]
You better lose yourself in the music, the moment
You own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
This opportunity comes once in a lifetime yo
You better lose yourself in the music, the moment
You own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
This opportunity comes once in a lifetime yo
(You better)

The soul's escaping, through this hole that is gaping
This world is mine for the taking
Make me king, as we move toward a new world order
A normal life is boring, but superstardom's close to post mortem
It only grows harder, homie grows hotter
He blows. It's all over. These hoes is all on him
Coast to coast shows, he's known as the globetrotter
Lonely roads, God only knows
He's grown farther from home, he's no father
He goes home and barely knows his own daughter
But hold your nose 'cause here goes the cold water
His hoes don't want him no more, he's cold product
They moved on to the next schmoe who flows
He nose dove and sold nada
So the soap opera is told and unfolds
I suppose it's old partner but the beat goes on
Da da dum da dum da da

[Hook]

No more games, I'ma change what you call rage
Tear this **** roof off like two dogs caged
I was playing in the beginning, the mood all changed
I've been chewed up and spat out and booed off stage
But I kept rhyming and stepped right into the next cypher
Best believe somebody's paying the pied piper
All the pain inside amplified by the fact
That I can't get by with my 9 to 5
And I can't provide the right type of life for my family
Cause man, these ******* food stamps don't buy diapers
And it's no movie, there's no Mekhi Phifer, this is my life
And these times are so hard, and it's getting even harder
Trying to feed and water my seed, plus
Teeter totter caught up between being a father and a prima donna
Baby mama drama's screaming on and
Too much for me to wanna
Stay in one spot, another day of monotony
Has gotten me to the point, I'm like a snail
I've got to formulate a plot or I end up in jail or shot
Success is my only **** option, failure's not
Mom, I love you, but this trailer's got to go
I cannot grow old in Salem's lot
So here I go it's my shot.
Feet, fail me not, this may be the only opportunity that I got

[Hook]

You can do anything you set your mind to, man
That's all copied from Lose Yourself- Eminem so you didn't make any of it -_- ....


@18tylerweeks Make a rap about me [/spoil]


you want me to make one about you too?
you oviously dont got clue
im bout to cook like your beef stew

now your bout to feel the wrath of aftermath
my rhymes are dirty
better give them a bath

if i were you id kill myself
im bout to put you away, and put you on my shelf

the road to fame is only one way
but it sucks that i have to defeat you n*ggas day by day

my rhymes are as hard a brick
your just a little anus lick

im done done with this guy hes shit
if i was him i would have already quit
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