Very sick! keep up the work man! :bigups:

Inspire wrote Very sick! keep up the work man! :bigups:

Cheers Man! And will do!


-Morgz

Dude you put a ton of renders in front of the text TOO MUCH. Try to make it look clean this looks sloppy. Put the renders behind the text try adding more conflicting colors. More designs an all around better image. Those renders dont look like they would blend with the text anyhow. Try cleaning it up a bit

Uniform wrote Dude you put a ton of renders in front of the text TOO MUCH. Try to make it look clean this looks sloppy. Put the renders behind the text try adding more conflicting colors. More designs an all around better image. Those renders dont look like they would blend with the text anyhow. Try cleaning it up a bit

Thanks ill keep that in mind! its my first attempt after a year of not being able to do this! Got a new pc so thought id have ago!

-Morgz

Im guessing most of that hour was spend rendering the text.
Because all that was done after that was layer from a pack.
Way too many of them

Looks cool, but maybe put everything behind the text.

Also, a different shade of gray it looks bland.

It still good for a beginner. If you want you can message me on here or skype or something and i can help you out.

If you want to get anywhere in graphic design, then you need to get away from cinema 4d unless your going to use it for a decent purpose, such as 3d modelling, or actually using the text in a manipulation where it can actually look good, try just using photoshop and choose a route you want to take.Check out the sticky post and then you can learn how to get better. Because from looking at your work now, cinema 4d is making you look like you don't know what you're doing.

As for that piece, not good at all, a couple of dodgy looking textures over a 3d text...


Please use this advice.

You asked for ops so im going to give them. Please dont take it in a negative way. But you need to learn to blend. There is really no blending. It looks like you took some stocks and threw them on there. Its nice for a beginners point but you just need to work on blending.