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Check out my Rhymes! Am i any good?
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God has turned to stone, watch him slowly die
Theres no one to save us
Its getting cold inside
Not a care in the world
No place i can turn
I got a date with the devil!
So just watch me burn
Heart broken into pieces
Tears of a clown
Just come back home now, my fears in my rounds
Comin up from the gutters
Everywhere you look, theres weirdos around
I wanted to do something great, take care of the family
But no hard i try, no one could understand me
My names Christian
Lost soul, locked away and in the asylum
First for being violent, but no hes gone silent
He screams alone, could never block out the sirens
When the dogs start barking and the guards start firing
So i keep Using
Feel less anxiety
Socialy awkward
lost within society
you would be disturbed if you ever saw whats inside of me
So **** sobriety, these rhymes are my diary!
I have spent weeks on putting rhymes together describing my feelings and life. I have been through quit a bit in my 16 years of living. I suffer from clinical depression, extreme anxiety attacks, bipolar disorder. On top i have a major drug addiction. So please if you dont like what you read, please dont hate, just tell me what you think, yalls opinion means the world to me! Thank you!
God has turned to stone, watch him slowly die
Theres no one to save us
Its getting cold inside
Not a care in the world
No place i can turn
I got a date with the devil!
So just watch me burn
Heart broken into pieces
Tears of a clown
Just come back home now, my fears in my rounds
Comin up from the gutters
Everywhere you look, theres weirdos around
I wanted to do something great, take care of the family
But no hard i try, no one could understand me
My names Christian
Lost soul, locked away and in the asylum
First for being violent, but no hes gone silent
He screams alone, could never block out the sirens
When the dogs start barking and the guards start firing
So i keep Using
Feel less anxiety
Socialy awkward
lost within society
you would be disturbed if you ever saw whats inside of me
So **** sobriety, these rhymes are my diary!
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I like your rhymes.. I think they're really good honestly. Keep working hard because clearly you've got talent.
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preety dope. My name is Christian to ans I suffer from Extreme anxiety attacks too. you got talent, use it before its too late.
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