>Intros were about 25 seconds long
>Flashy screen pumps in the begining = obnoxious
>WAY too much twitch
>No "end"
>Misspelled "watching"
>There didn't appear to be any syncing
>From what the OCE looks like, most likely template for your 3D tracking intro
>None or very unoticeable CC
>Cheesy optical flare

You have some work to do, I didn't even listen to whatever music there was, but it looked like a cliche twixtor until a bass drop. If you're going to do that, sync the rest of the shots to the beats, not just the first one. Also, twich is a niche effect. It doesn't just fit in anywhere in an edit. It's something you get a feel for, not something you use arbitrarily, as it is distracting and hurts the eyes if you use it for too long. Generally, it looks like you're trying to be a mainstream editor. Originality gets you places. If you don't think I know what I'm talking about, you can see my own edits.
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