SuperFX wrote

Mrs_Zambies wrote

SuperFX wrote

Couple things, this is pretty good. Practice makes perfect though.
Also, Don't want to sound like a newb, but whats a tag?
And last, I like how Zambies like to talk down to everyone.

im talking down because im being honest? do you want me to say it is amazing? its awful im not going to lie

No, I'm not saying that.
It's just that every post I've seen of yours, you've said something bad, and down.
And yes you're right you should be honest and not lie.
But, be a little generous?

Generosity builds up a false sense of accomplishment. If its the truth, it needs to be said regardless if it hurts someone's feelings or not. Sugar coating it doesn't do a thing but prolong the learning process.

The smudge on the background itself is a good starting point, but you want it to blend well, its too hard of transitions on the colors. The render itself should blend on the edges more. As well I would move the light source over a tad. you have it so its on his head but in the render you can see its reflecting around his shoulder. As for the text, typography is a whole new realm of tags. I'd suggest mastering the smudge before typography or vice versa because the text doesn't match the flow.

Just some feedback. I've got my faith that you can improve, keep up the work

thanks bap lol

Thanks Bap, that is what I was looking for Zambies. I can take any insult/feedback as long as you tell me why. I want to improve so it doesn't look Horrendous. Bap, got any tips for blending more? I haven't seen a youtube tut around.. If there is one, it would be great if anyone PMed it too me. You could say I am not the best matcher of colors. (reference to clothes)I in't so good at it.

Listen, If I gave every piece of work on here a story of feedback I could have wrote a bible on graphics, it gets old really fast and its the same old same old

Mrs_Zambies wrote Listen, If I gave every piece of work on here a story of feedback I could have wrote a bible on graphics, it gets old really fast and its the same old same old

Still you should try to give constructive criticism it helps them out not just say it's bad even if it is it doesn't help.

Mrs_Zambies wrote Listen, If I gave every piece of work on here a story of feedback I could have wrote a bible on graphics, it gets old really fast and its the same old same old

Well pretty new to me, that was my second one, and got almost no feedback on my first except blend the text more.

Zamb do you even make tags?

Practice makes perfect you'll get there.

why has this been bumped it was from last tuesday