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Just got bored and started to make this, its still a work in progress. My favorite part is the background itself, i like the colors. I know my font choice for the left side wasnt the best but i couldnt find anything else haha. I would like some opinions for what i should put on the right side. This is only my second time making one of these so please provide ways i can correct myself!

Note: Im posting a link to it because for some reason whenever i upload to an image sharing site like tinypic or imgur it lowers my quality and i want you guys to see it full quality

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Nice design. I'll get straight to the point.

Like the colour scheme. I like the navigation bar, looks simple that's the key to it. Header is quite bland. I think an image slider would be more suiting. Add information next to the image (That lorem ipsum crap). You have nailed the bottom, that is perfect.

Overall i like it and hope for a version 2 to be added.
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iDark wrote Nice design. I'll get straight to the point.

Like the colour scheme. I like the navigation bar, looks simple that's the key to it. Header is quite bland. I think an image slider would be more suiting. Add information next to the image (That lorem ipsum crap). You have nailed the bottom, that is perfect.

Overall i like it and hope for a version 2 to be added.


Wow thank your feedback is superb. Thank you, i will be sure to update with a v2 in a bit!
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changed with a v2 guys, be sure to check it out
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You aced it Icon. Can't wait to see future designs of yours.
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thank you once again
anymore feedback?
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Really tired so real quick feedback

- If this was real it'd be way too wide, usually 960px is the standard for web sites because of small monitors.

- Colors go nicely, good background image

- I don't like the big CA and the line to the right of it on the bottom, looks too out of place for some reason.

- Font is all good, navigation is good, etc.

Overall very nice, but really the width is gonna kill it if ever this was going to be a real design. I really couldn't pick out many things that were wrong.
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x3ternal_HavocX wrote Really tired so real quick feedback

- If this was real it'd be way too wide, usually 960px is the standard for web sites because of small monitors.

- Colors go nicely, good background image

- I don't like the big CA and the line to the right of it on the bottom, looks too out of place for some reason.

- Font is all good, navigation is good, etc.

Overall very nice, but really the width is gonna kill it if ever this was going to be a real design. I really couldn't pick out many things that were wrong.


Thanks for the feedback, i wasnt really basing it off of a real site lol thats probably why its so wide, i just did it so it could fit full screen on my monitor, and i will be sure to work with the CA and line in the bottom half, il update it later with a v3. Thanks for the feedback again
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