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Zelotic
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Hey guys its been about a couple months since I've even touched my laptop
and I just decided to make something..
nothing special or complicated but I thought it looked alright but I thought it could use alot more but I didnt have any time.
Here it is.
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Thanks..
Note* it has been I while I'm very rusty.
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thats sick yo.. do you make youtube bakgrounds
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Very nice. I like it ;)
9/10
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Welcome back dude, always nice to see people returning. (There are a few others that kind of dropped off the face of the planet).

Anyways as for this, I can obviously tell that you either ran out of ideas (it happens) or you meant for it to be like that, but there is a lot of blackspace. I think even something like a gradient or a real subtle texture that had subtle hues of orange/red/pink in them would make it seem a lot more like a complete piece.

Next, I personally hate orange, its my least favorite color by far and I try to stay away from it as much as possible. I do like the way it is used here tho, the pinks and reds give it a nice feel.

The lines on the render seem to stand out a lot (almost like he's being outlined in orange). I would try to either remove them or at least darken them.

The effects look nice and the "swoosh" really adds to the tropical-y feel of it.
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x3ternal_HavocX wrote Welcome back dude, always nice to see people returning. (There are a few others that kind of dropped off the face of the planet).

Anyways as for this, I can obviously tell that you either ran out of ideas (it happens) or you meant for it to be like that, but there is a lot of blackspace. I think even something like a gradient or a real subtle texture that had subtle hues of orange/red/pink in them would make it seem a lot more like a complete piece.

Next, I personally hate orange, its my least favorite color by far and I try to stay away from it as much as possible. I do like the way it is used here tho, the pinks and reds give it a nice feel.

The lines on the render seem to stand out a lot (almost like he's being outlined in orange). I would try to either remove them or at least darken them.

The effects look nice and the "swoosh" really adds to the tropical-y feel of it.


thanks for some feedback man..
yeah I'm kinda fried out lol I guess I was kicked out of faintFX lol
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thats pretty sick


looks hot
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Zelotic wrote
x3ternal_HavocX wrote Welcome back dude, always nice to see people returning. (There are a few others that kind of dropped off the face of the planet).

Anyways as for this, I can obviously tell that you either ran out of ideas (it happens) or you meant for it to be like that, but there is a lot of blackspace. I think even something like a gradient or a real subtle texture that had subtle hues of orange/red/pink in them would make it seem a lot more like a complete piece.

Next, I personally hate orange, its my least favorite color by far and I try to stay away from it as much as possible. I do like the way it is used here tho, the pinks and reds give it a nice feel.

The lines on the render seem to stand out a lot (almost like he's being outlined in orange). I would try to either remove them or at least darken them.

The effects look nice and the "swoosh" really adds to the tropical-y feel of it.


thanks for some feedback man..
yeah I'm kinda fried out lol I guess I was kicked out of faintFX lol


Dude I think everyone was kicked out of FaintFX, I think Zef might've just made it his own personal YouTube channel, but tbh I have no idea.
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